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(Second take on this description, since I accidentally erased it once.)

Yet another "new" character. Some know him as Time Turner, just a regular earth pony who maintains and repairs clocks. Some know him as The Doctor. Who is he really? I leave that to your imagination, I won't dig into his character any further.

As for him and Colgate/Minuette, their relationship is purely platonic.


As always, MLP:FiM is owned by Hasbro and created by , I make no profit of this whatsoever, please don't sue me.
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ZombiesTaste In reply to ??? [2014-05-08 16:11:58 +0000 UTC]

Allons-y my ponies :-3

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ReginaStarfire In reply to ??? [2014-04-25 18:40:50 +0000 UTC]

Can we seriously have an MLP fan work that DOESN'T involve Dr. Who?Β  Everyone thinks they're clever, but seriously it's rarer to see one WITHOUT him than with him.

Is there some kind of law that states MLP fan works have to steal from Dr. Who? Can it not just be left alone?

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BadlyDrawnTurtle In reply to ReginaStarfire [2014-05-12 21:25:31 +0000 UTC]

Although it seems to work fine here, there are times where I agree with you completely. Yes, make all of the cross-over Doctor/MLP stories you want, but sometimes a reference breaks the flow of a story, especially if it's an overused one.Β I'm working on a Doctor Whooves fanfic myself, but I wouldn't dream of putting him in any of the other stories I'm brewing; he just doesn't belong there.

Note: It might belong there eventually, though. Doctor Whooves is getting increasingly closer to canon; it started with the older collectible cards referencing Doctor Who (they used the phrase timey-wimey on a Time Turner card), along with a bunch of (fan-pandering) merchandise. It received a major boost with the IDW comics, where some of the alternate covers, and a number of visual references in the comics themselves, make clear Doctor Who connections (The most prominent of the in-comic ones is in part 4/4 of the Nightmare Rarity arc, where The Doctor appears repeatedly in the background, sometimes more than once in a panel.). And starting in the recently ended season, references could even be seen on the show (it seems that his current companion is Rose(-luck)). So, yeah. It's so close to canon that complaining about it is becoming difficult to justify.

Yay for rambling!

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TriteBristle In reply to ReginaStarfire [2014-04-25 19:51:04 +0000 UTC]

I personally prefer to refer to him as Time Turner in this particular universe. >:3
And this is pretty much all the spotlight he ever gets in this whole comic, so it's just a one-time reference like the other ones (South Park, Bioshock, and so on).

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Twizzler787 [2014-04-22 00:15:47 +0000 UTC]

*RarityVoice* Your attempt at sounding mysterious about "Time Turner" does not affect us Whovians. But it was a good attempt, darling.

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987654321o [2014-04-21 00:07:35 +0000 UTC]

I'm starting to think that mlp is another dimension were ponys are the opposite gender as the people version of them.

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shaduron [2014-04-13 15:05:06 +0000 UTC]

Lyra blush counter: 1
BonBon blush counter: 18
Total blush counter:19

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SheymaShineStar In reply to shaduron [2014-05-09 07:49:46 +0000 UTC]

YOU NEVER STOP! DONT STOP!

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shaduron In reply to SheymaShineStar [2014-05-09 18:02:36 +0000 UTC]

I won't stop, but I kinda have to at the moment while I wait for more pages to be uploaded.

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SheymaShineStar In reply to shaduron [2014-05-10 02:55:20 +0000 UTC]

aww D:

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ILOVEGIR64 In reply to ??? [2014-04-06 23:25:18 +0000 UTC]

OMG!! Stan, Cartman, Kyle and Butters!!!....wait....Where's Kenny???

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Edward256 In reply to ILOVEGIR64 [2015-08-25 15:23:36 +0000 UTC]

I'll give you 3 guesses...

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Jamiboi In reply to ILOVEGIR64 [2014-04-08 15:42:55 +0000 UTC]

over on another story: Oh my god they killed kenny! XD sorry couldn't resist

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Brackets002 In reply to ??? [2014-03-31 00:00:31 +0000 UTC]

Panel 9:
www.youtube.com/watch?v=SuYbL0…

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GalaxyGlitch In reply to ??? [2014-03-23 22:49:40 +0000 UTC]

Hurrhurrhurr I was watching doctor who while listening to thisΒ 

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SongMina In reply to ??? [2014-03-22 12:33:03 +0000 UTC]

Hehhehhee...

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jeremeymcdude In reply to ??? [2014-03-19 03:35:27 +0000 UTC]

I sense a distubance in the force. Β 

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CrazyHetaliaLover13 In reply to ??? [2014-03-15 23:46:33 +0000 UTC]

YES!!!!! YES!!!!! WHOVIANS UNITE!!!!!!!!!!!

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Twizzler787 In reply to CrazyHetaliaLover13 [2014-04-22 00:16:34 +0000 UTC]

YES! BRING YOUR SONIC SCREWDRIVERS TOGETHER TO...
Β ...fix clocks?Β 
Just not wooden ones.

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CrazyHetaliaLover13 In reply to Twizzler787 [2014-04-23 22:13:53 +0000 UTC]

KILL ALL THE PEARS!!!

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Twizzler787 In reply to CrazyHetaliaLover13 [2014-04-23 23:03:43 +0000 UTC]

AND EAT ALL THE BANANAS!

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CrazyHetaliaLover13 In reply to Twizzler787 [2014-05-08 03:26:27 +0000 UTC]

AND FISH STICKS WITH CUSTARD!

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Twizzler787 In reply to CrazyHetaliaLover13 [2014-05-08 12:24:47 +0000 UTC]

AND WEAR ALL THE BOWTIES!

Β Wait, what were we talking about again?

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CrazyHetaliaLover13 In reply to Twizzler787 [2014-05-08 12:32:06 +0000 UTC]

Doctor Who? Duh. AND WEAR ALL THE FEZES AND SCARVES AND STETSONS!

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Twizzler787 In reply to CrazyHetaliaLover13 [2014-05-08 12:33:45 +0000 UTC]

KILL ALL THE DALEKS AND CYBERMEN AND EVIL TIME LORDS!

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CrazyHetaliaLover13 In reply to Twizzler787 [2014-05-08 12:38:01 +0000 UTC]

SMASH ALL THE WEEPING ANGELS WITH A HAMMER!

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Twizzler787 In reply to CrazyHetaliaLover13 [2014-05-08 23:52:27 +0000 UTC]

FLY ALL THE TARDISES!

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CrazyHetaliaLover13 In reply to Twizzler787 [2014-05-09 00:49:28 +0000 UTC]

Damn, you're good...

I give up.

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Twizzler787 In reply to CrazyHetaliaLover13 [2014-05-09 01:13:29 +0000 UTC]

You are a formidable opponent.
Β Time to become friends!

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CrazyHetaliaLover13 In reply to Twizzler787 [2014-05-09 01:53:09 +0000 UTC]

W00t! :iconprussiawootplz:

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InfiniteHeartStudios In reply to ??? [2014-03-13 02:44:56 +0000 UTC]

DR.WHOOVES!!!!!!!!!Β 

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superlink1425 [2014-03-11 17:06:09 +0000 UTC]

someponys in loveΒ 

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silvermist1223 In reply to ??? [2014-03-07 00:58:07 +0000 UTC]

the docter was there and ditzy home... wait did he say family

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lark-a-griff In reply to ??? [2014-03-01 15:47:55 +0000 UTC]

COLGATE IS BEST TARDIS

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hitoshi316 [2014-02-24 03:20:29 +0000 UTC]

Man I'm slow.... Β NightmareMoon escaping from the moon... wow I suck that it took me this long to get it.

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TriteBristle In reply to hitoshi316 [2014-02-24 11:59:07 +0000 UTC]

Nope, NMM didn't escape till the night. What occurred here is something else (that will be addressed after the end of chapter 5).

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KiwiJr In reply to ??? [2014-02-11 05:44:48 +0000 UTC]

The smile has a reason

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123cupcake In reply to ??? [2014-02-10 18:32:59 +0000 UTC]

doctor!!!!!!!!!!!

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123cupcake In reply to ??? [2014-02-10 18:32:25 +0000 UTC]

'you can even see the hearts above her head!!!'

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pianogirl8 In reply to ??? [2014-02-08 00:17:55 +0000 UTC]

Homos? I see in EVERY mlp comic *practically* Great story! ^.^ Got me addicted.....Β 

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987654321o In reply to ??? [2014-02-04 06:53:01 +0000 UTC]

doctor whooves!!!... i know whos next assistant DERPY WHOOVES!! yay!

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EcliptorCalrissian In reply to ??? [2014-02-04 05:40:44 +0000 UTC]

I'm loving your comic so far. You really bring to life the background characters in a believable way, all of them. You don't even have to be a shipper; this is pretty much that second show about the background ponies that everybody would kill to see made.


Extra kudos for the use of Lyra's 'humans' thing. I was getting tired of it around the fandom because you want to see your favorite background pony fleshed out more and instead all anyone does is make the same joke for the millionth time about the way she was seen sitting once ever... but you managed to use it cleverly and expand her.


Naughty with Time Turner/Doctor Whooves. Made it sound like some ominous things were brewing...Β 

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fotland42 [2014-02-03 22:21:56 +0000 UTC]

I wonder just how much Bon-Bon's going to find once she starts SCIENCING!

Yes, that's a verb. A verb which only exists in all caps. And with a bang. Literally, you have to say things like "Bon-bon is going to SCIENCE! Lyra so hard tonight."
Innuendo is optional, though.

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pokemonlegend999 In reply to ??? [2014-02-01 03:10:25 +0000 UTC]

OMG let me see dumb computer! ?

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PoeticSakura In reply to ??? [2014-01-31 21:37:26 +0000 UTC]

BUTTERS!! AND THE DOCTOR!

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LightningBoltSuprise [2014-01-24 01:36:53 +0000 UTC]

LADIES AND GENTLEMEN... THE DOCTOR... IS IN THE HOUSE!!!

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littlequeen456 In reply to ??? [2014-01-22 13:56:01 +0000 UTC]

they have the same cutie mark..... i bet she was a companion!!!!Β 

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LtCWest In reply to littlequeen456 [2014-02-02 19:48:32 +0000 UTC]

Actually she's the TARDIS.

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littlequeen456 In reply to LtCWest [2014-02-03 02:02:02 +0000 UTC]

Wat!?

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LtCWest In reply to littlequeen456 [2014-02-03 07:21:09 +0000 UTC]

There was a comic somewhere that ferenced that one scene from Dr. Who when the TARDIS becomes a human beeing. In that case it was Colgate.

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