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tygerbug — Return of Trixie (Uncut Script)
Published: 2012-06-08 07:45:14 +0000 UTC; Views: 2771; Favourites: 29; Downloads: 43
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An unofficial episode of My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic written by Garrett Gilchrist.Boastful failed magician The Great and Powerful Trixie has fallen on hard times, and returns to Ponyville to take revenge on her "nemesis," Twilight Sparkle. When the two are forced to work together on a lavish birthday party for spoiled rich girl Diamond Tiara, will they keep their anger in check? Or do Trixie and Twilight both have something up their sleeves?
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I'd rather see a Sherlock Holmes styled episode where Trixie is in fact a wanted fugitive due to her actions in her last appearance, and plots a series of dastardly crimes (manipulating other villains like the Diamond Dogs and Gilda into working for her) that will play a part in her revenge against Twilight, who with the help of her perennial sidekick, adopted younger brother and chronicler Spike, seeks to determine what despicable master plan Trixie ultimately has up her sleeves. She has such potential to be a true criminal mastermind.
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The confrontation on stage feels a bit rushed if not confusing. A bit too much of fan service, but that's not too bad. It was nice otherwise
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You had me at "Loud Shouty Type"
You have written such a brilliantly funny episode that pays homage to plenty of fandom silliness while staying true to the show.
Seriously, this is AMAZING. As Trixie's Self Appointed Number One Fan I approve this script as 100% Great and Powerful!
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How peculiar. I can't seem to read it. DeviantArt doesn't seem to want to load it...
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Interesting read, is this for the Funimation Project?
There are a couple of points where Zecora's lines are written as actions.
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Fixed. I'll submit it to Funimation if I can cut 10 pages from it. For some reason they have a 15 page limit. A real episode would be 23-6 pages, as I've written here.
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Yeah, the ones I wrote are like half episodes at 11 min each. I'm scrambling to finish the second one though.
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Okay, I've just finished a 15-page short version for Funimation. Nothing that important was lost.
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