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AlinaLeeArts [2020-02-25 15:04:10 +0000 UTC]

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Yuukon [2020-01-05 11:13:14 +0000 UTC]

Awww, these are super cute! I really like how much detail you've put into them, and just look at those tiny bits! I would've lost my patience When looking at these, I do notice that in the presentation can be some improvement. You set them up super cute, from big to small next to each other, which is really nice, but the light appears to be uneven, which causes dark shadows at the bottom parts of the storage jar lids, as well as below the jars themselves. I think that if you were to work with more even light, such as taking them outside on a cloudy day, this can all be remedied. The clouds work like a giant diffuser, so won't get any of the harsh shadows you have now. Perhaps you could also put a coin or something next to them to indicate scale! It will help the viewer imagine what size they really are. These are super cute and colourful, though, and I would totally put them in my kitchen!

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