HOME | DD

MahAmmar [2017-03-17 00:37:04 +0000 UTC]

Sup, man! I'm here from ProjectComment  

- The colors are well done. It's a pretty neat palette, simple, and has strong coloring for the details. You shading and lights give her the right volume, so her body looks natural and it's too, pretty well built. Nice work. 
Her design is cool, too. Creative, not very full and easily indentifiable. 
The piece composition is well balanced, and your brand/signature doesn't get more attention than the character. 

- Her left arm is the part most poorly constructed. If it's going down, especially with the other up, the shoulder shouldn't stick out like that. The hand angle looks too straight, too, almost 90º and while that's possible, it doesn't look good. The shading also makes it look like her hand is crooked, with the thumb in the wrong place. 
The staff if perfectly done, tho, so that can be fixed with just a subtle rearranging of the hand position. 

Lastly, the lines look poorly cut? Idk how to explain it, but it looks like you selected the lines without any smoothing done, and pasted Edith in another sheet, and now we can see pixels all around her and around her skin markings too. The same happens with the white lines in your signature. Be careful with that, friend. It makes the whole thing a bit sloppier. 

That's all! Keep up your work, because it looks cool!   

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

TabuuForteAkugun [2017-01-26 23:44:28 +0000 UTC]

Cool! IIRC this is the girl who beat up the 2 guys in the ring?

👍: 0 ⏩: 1