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Description While trying to find you
I lost myself.
I thought I had control
- I thought I knew what I was doing.

I lost my soul
-because of you
Puked it down,
and flushed it down the toilet.

Dear perfect body,
you wouldn't obey!
Now I've given up on you
and I'm trying to forget about "us"

Dear perfect body,
You will never be mine.
I want you, I need you
but I just can't have you.
- You are a lie that I wanted to believe in.

Dear body, forgive me for the damage I have done.
                        I love you.
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Comments: 38

emmausgirl94 [2013-01-30 02:24:20 +0000 UTC]

Explains my life last year and I regret every minute of everything. I'm so sorry body. Thank you for writing this.

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unknown-sources In reply to emmausgirl94 [2013-01-30 13:35:37 +0000 UTC]

I am working on my recovery myself, - I am glad you are better
I'm glad this means something to you

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emmausgirl94 In reply to unknown-sources [2013-01-30 19:10:27 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad you're recovering too It won't be easy, but not impossible. And thanks

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unknown-sources In reply to emmausgirl94 [2013-01-31 19:42:44 +0000 UTC]

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Doll-of-a-vampire [2011-06-13 21:18:29 +0000 UTC]

So very true! You think only of that image you want to become and before you know it you can no longer recognize yourself when you look into the mirror. It's scary but often a wellneeded wakeup-call...

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unknown-sources In reply to Doll-of-a-vampire [2011-06-13 22:53:08 +0000 UTC]

Well said !

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silentxrainxdrops [2011-06-11 01:25:32 +0000 UTC]

I love this. It's beautiful. I can totally relate.

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unknown-sources In reply to silentxrainxdrops [2011-06-11 21:54:04 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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richmond-c [2011-03-20 06:19:12 +0000 UTC]

one painful truth.
nicely done!

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unknown-sources In reply to richmond-c [2011-03-20 11:05:40 +0000 UTC]

thank you!

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PandasPwnz [2011-01-13 15:10:14 +0000 UTC]

I love this (: it's sad, but yet it gives one hope, that in the end everything may be okay. Did you go through this? I hope not, because a person with a personality as great as yours shouldn't go through this (:

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unknown-sources In reply to PandasPwnz [2011-01-13 18:56:47 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!

I did have some problems with ED, but I am really going towards the right
direction now!



Thank you for the kind words, you are great as well!

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PandasPwnz In reply to unknown-sources [2011-01-13 19:10:46 +0000 UTC]

Glad to hear it! I wish you all the best in the future (:

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unknown-sources In reply to PandasPwnz [2011-01-14 14:05:47 +0000 UTC]

thank you!

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nachilo7 [2011-01-08 19:39:14 +0000 UTC]

wow, nice work! i'm sorry, i don't know enough english, what's ED??... Looking for the perfect body is a problem, at some point we have to accept the way we are. Perfection is a confusing term, it accepts a lot of different points of views. nice work i like it

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unknown-sources In reply to nachilo7 [2011-01-09 13:14:16 +0000 UTC]

thank you!

ED is short for eating disorders

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nachilo7 In reply to unknown-sources [2011-01-10 04:41:24 +0000 UTC]

oh, thanks for the answer, i thought it was related to anorexia or bulimia, guess i was right, thanks! and i hope u're doing well, escape form those ED

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unknown-sources In reply to nachilo7 [2011-01-10 16:19:56 +0000 UTC]

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Miyokoiscute [2011-01-08 18:27:38 +0000 UTC]

I Should show it to my cousin she told me she wanted a perfect body that she wanted that and she doesn't understand maybe this will

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GyspyGrace [2011-01-08 05:03:46 +0000 UTC]

This is great. Good job.

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unknown-sources In reply to GyspyGrace [2011-01-08 11:14:30 +0000 UTC]

than you!

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GrEEnCooKie656 [2011-01-07 23:03:02 +0000 UTC]

wow! very great Idea
you are sooo right no body is perfect .. each person should like it's one body ^.^♥
good written

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unknown-sources In reply to GrEEnCooKie656 [2011-01-08 11:14:48 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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GrEEnCooKie656 In reply to unknown-sources [2011-01-20 13:53:34 +0000 UTC]

welcome my dear ^-^

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kellyrose95 [2011-01-07 22:49:17 +0000 UTC]

Very powerful message: No one is perfect. however, we all want " the perfect body." We have to live with what we have. good job and keep up the good work

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unknown-sources In reply to kellyrose95 [2011-01-08 11:15:25 +0000 UTC]

thank you for reading and taking the time to comment

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kellyrose95 In reply to unknown-sources [2011-01-08 14:51:52 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome

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your-whisper [2011-01-07 21:36:58 +0000 UTC]

i have been there to a point. i don think really lost control though. i hope you are getting better. and i like this. igh style ne similarly, if thats ok?

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unknown-sources In reply to your-whisper [2011-01-07 22:25:42 +0000 UTC]

Yes, I am very fine now

I'm not really sure what you meant there,but it's probably alright

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your-whisper In reply to unknown-sources [2011-01-07 22:28:28 +0000 UTC]

lol just wrote a poem saying sorry to my body. if you want to, read it and comment with your link. and i glad you are. i trying

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your-whisper In reply to your-whisper [2011-01-07 21:38:38 +0000 UTC]

to make sense of that: "i might style one similarly, if thats ok?"
dont wanna steal your idea. i just wanna say sorry to my arm

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Lioness-Lindsey [2011-01-07 20:35:18 +0000 UTC]

this is really emotional, it's sad yet hopeful.

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unknown-sources In reply to Lioness-Lindsey [2011-01-07 22:26:26 +0000 UTC]

thank you for taking the time to read and comment!

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Lioness-Lindsey In reply to unknown-sources [2011-01-08 01:22:21 +0000 UTC]

no problem.

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WrensthavAviovus [2011-01-07 19:38:29 +0000 UTC]

Usually don't read through these, but this one caught my eye.

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unknown-sources In reply to WrensthavAviovus [2011-01-07 22:25:59 +0000 UTC]

tnx for stopping by!

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Duomaxwel [2011-01-07 18:51:46 +0000 UTC]

Very good poem. Very emotional and personal.

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unknown-sources In reply to Duomaxwel [2011-01-07 19:22:25 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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