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Description I've seen this girl a thousand times,
I've watched as she fails
and I've seen her break down.
And not one single time did I
bother helping her getting up.

I've seen this girl every morning
as she puts her make up on.
I've seen as she rubs
her tired, empty eyes.

I've seen her every night
when the clock strikes 12.
She sits on a bench in the park
all by herself,
and dries tears from her cheeks.

I've seen this girl a thousand times,
I see her every time I look in the mirror.
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Comments: 29

brokejunepoet [2011-01-07 18:02:12 +0000 UTC]

her name is Eleanor Rigby

do listen to the song 'Eleanor Rigby' by the Beatles, though i suggest you find a version sing by Joan Baez, because the vocals are much more beautiful .

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NeuzaKC [2010-12-27 20:32:16 +0000 UTC]

This is very pretty. It's hard to find such simple yet powerful poetry these days. Very good work.

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unknown-sources In reply to NeuzaKC [2010-12-27 23:12:42 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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IRCSS [2010-11-06 23:43:27 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful, but painful i guess.

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unknown-sources In reply to IRCSS [2010-11-06 23:53:22 +0000 UTC]

thank you

Sadly, sides of life are painful

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IRCSS In reply to unknown-sources [2010-11-07 00:02:08 +0000 UTC]

Sadly,, all of it is painfully, but don't worry the first century is the hardest part!

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unknown-sources In reply to IRCSS [2010-11-07 10:54:30 +0000 UTC]

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captainmomo [2010-03-21 16:41:21 +0000 UTC]

beautifull <3

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unknown-sources In reply to captainmomo [2010-03-22 16:19:00 +0000 UTC]

thank you!

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captainmomo In reply to unknown-sources [2010-03-25 14:05:44 +0000 UTC]

no problem ^^

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Leadtowardeternity [2010-03-15 21:22:56 +0000 UTC]

I was once that girl

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unknown-sources In reply to Leadtowardeternity [2010-03-15 21:25:35 +0000 UTC]

I believe that everyone is that girl sometimes, or has been..

Thank you for commenting!

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Amaya1792 [2010-03-15 00:50:01 +0000 UTC]

The imagery is gorgeous...
I really love this poem

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unknown-sources In reply to Amaya1792 [2010-03-15 14:57:20 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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Amaya1792 In reply to unknown-sources [2010-03-15 23:49:17 +0000 UTC]

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CuppytheCupcake [2010-03-14 21:26:38 +0000 UTC]

beautiful.

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unknown-sources In reply to CuppytheCupcake [2010-03-14 21:48:10 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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CuppytheCupcake In reply to unknown-sources [2010-03-16 00:14:55 +0000 UTC]

youre welcome

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13-15-15-14-10-1 [2010-03-14 16:33:52 +0000 UTC]

beautiful, and remarkable ^.^

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unknown-sources In reply to 13-15-15-14-10-1 [2010-03-14 19:05:24 +0000 UTC]

thank you!

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TreeHuggingNica [2010-03-14 10:16:57 +0000 UTC]

Gave me goosebumps

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unknown-sources In reply to TreeHuggingNica [2010-03-14 10:32:22 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad

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ashnight8846 [2010-03-13 18:54:07 +0000 UTC]

i like it...

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unknown-sources In reply to ashnight8846 [2010-03-13 19:52:17 +0000 UTC]

thank you!

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ashnight8846 In reply to unknown-sources [2010-03-13 19:53:51 +0000 UTC]

np

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KANUULS [2010-03-13 17:11:31 +0000 UTC]

You just overdid yourself buddy

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unknown-sources In reply to KANUULS [2010-03-13 18:20:47 +0000 UTC]

thank you!

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thegreywizard [2010-03-13 15:00:33 +0000 UTC]

I love how beautifully you describe her. It really paints a picture in my mind.

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unknown-sources In reply to thegreywizard [2010-03-13 17:03:36 +0000 UTC]

thank you!

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