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Published: 2009-09-01 21:01:29 +0000 UTC; Views: 1115; Favourites: 14; Downloads: 5
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This morning is quiet,This morning seems dark.
No birds are singing,
Not one single lark.
No jangle in trees,
No splashing in creeks,
All the birds died,
Now they lie in the streets.
The air is heavy,
I cannot breath,
My eyes are shut,
So i can not see.
There are no humans,
They are all gone.
No more happiness,
Not a single tone.
This morning is quiet,
This morning seems dark,
We were never saved
By Noah’s ark.
I never woke up,
I never wrote this.
All we remember,
Is lost in time.
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Comments: 37
This has quite a powerful feeling of dark loneliness to it. I especially like "The air is heavy". Nice job
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i like the rhyme and the simple beginning. it reels readers in easily :>
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oh btw, did you mean 'Noah's arc' or 'Noah's ark'?
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umm.. I'm not sure, what is right?
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ark. cuz 'arc' is related more to something of a curve/bow shaped stuff and whereas 'ark' is more of a boat-like/chest/box structure. besides, it's always been Noah's Ark.
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aha, ok..
Thanks
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I like it. made me think of all those end of the world movies.
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I'm glad you liked it!
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poor little bird, nice poem, love it!!!!!
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aww, thank you
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An interesting thing to think about, ya know? Well written, and I hope you do well in the contest.
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Your welcome a lot.
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This made me smile. It made me see a new prespective on someone dead or none existing and what their thoughts would be ^^ Hope you win.
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thank you thank you
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whoah thats amazing. dang ur really creative 
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