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The world is a mysteryAnd if youβre a part of it
Youβre a part of the unbelievable mystery
That is really unknown,
We as humans may know some
But this world still has us puzzled
Even if we want to admit to it or not
Where just dumbfounded humans
Trying to make our way through what is really still unknown.
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Comments: 38
valleigh In reply to cyimang [2013-04-24 00:38:24 +0000 UTC]
thank you, i have a new mind set today and it is helping me
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cyimang In reply to valleigh [2013-04-24 00:44:08 +0000 UTC]
You are very welcome Awesome, glad its working for you
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IceAngel1234 In reply to valleigh [2013-04-24 00:24:27 +0000 UTC]
No problem, I right poetry as well
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valleigh In reply to IceAngel1234 [2013-04-24 00:26:33 +0000 UTC]
go check out the poetry group I run, and tell others to do so as well, if you please.
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valleigh In reply to IceAngel1234 [2013-04-24 00:57:17 +0000 UTC]
yes that is why i told you to go there
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IceAngel1234 In reply to valleigh [2013-04-24 20:44:14 +0000 UTC]
Yep. Can you do me a huge favor and check out my journal entries? Thanks so much if you do.
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valleigh In reply to IceAngel1234 [2013-04-24 20:45:27 +0000 UTC]
why do you want me to read them for? looks like a story.
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IceAngel1234 In reply to valleigh [2013-04-24 20:47:02 +0000 UTC]
Because I just want to hear feedback. Poetry can be long.
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valleigh In reply to IceAngel1234 [2013-04-25 07:20:40 +0000 UTC]
then post it with a critique with it and you will get that. it's best to post it under poetry too if you want that, I never really read others journles.
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IceAngel1234 In reply to valleigh [2013-04-25 20:11:11 +0000 UTC]
I can't post it with a critique because I don't have the Premium membership which you have to pay for. I do post it under poetry and why?
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valleigh In reply to IceAngel1234 [2013-04-25 20:12:30 +0000 UTC]
because that is how i have it set up, if you want me to give feed back, you send me a note, i have rules posted on the group page
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IceAngel1234 In reply to valleigh [2013-04-24 20:37:49 +0000 UTC]
>< haah this is awkward.
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