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Published: 2015-01-16 20:28:46 +0000 UTC; Views: 73006; Favourites: 561; Downloads: 270
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"It's not like I never tried to ask for permission before. I tried. But nopony let me kiss them after that and I never have chance to kiss them anymore. That's why I have to use this method "Surprise Kiss Target => Avoid Target => Wait until target clam down => Explain the reason to target.""Anyway, It's seem like someone though that I am the one who made all of OCs Commission Cards. You are misunderstood, humans. I am not the one who created them. I am not the one who kiss all of that OCs. The ponies I was kiss will have the cards like this"
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"You can see. same background, same magic circle. It's mean It was made by the same caster. Please understand........You heard me, right humans?.........Mom! I'm done with breaking 4th wall now. Can you repair it for me, please?" ___ Alternate Dawn
"Please use 4th wall gate next time, my son. This wall really hard to repair, you know!?!" __ Twilight Sparkle
Shipping and Descendant Warning :
Spike X Rarity(Nightmare pony) = Sparity(Daughter)
Pinkie Pie X ??? = Super Surprise(Descendant)
(Spifire X Soarin) X (Daring Do X Ahuizotl) = Aerial Ace(Descendant)
Big Macintosh X Fluttershy = Apple Eden (Descendant)
Twilight Sparkle X -- Top Secret -- = Alternate Dawn(Son)
Alternate Dawn Card Collection => vavacung.deviantart.com/galler…
Warning : This story takes place 100 years after Rarity dead. This story base on season 4. So anything that happened in season 5 will have nothing to do with this story.
Warning : This story's an alternate universe and is really crazy at times. Futa-spell or the magic that can make female pony impregnate another female pony doesn't exist.
Warning : a lot of 4th wall breaking and referencing. Sharing universe with "To Love God - To Love Mortal" but in the future and more crazy. *You don't need to read "To Love God - To Love Mortal" to understand this story. It's just have many Easter egg for that story here.*
If you confused about chronology of this story, You can watch this timeline to help you => vavacung.deviantart.com/art/Cr…
English Editor : dracoblair.deviantart.com/
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Comments: 304
RedeemerofDark [2023-05-14 14:00:12 +0000 UTC]
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davidshadow275 [2023-04-08 00:22:34 +0000 UTC]
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diggerdowns [2022-06-15 14:19:33 +0000 UTC]
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XthernusAndi [2020-06-15 20:33:40 +0000 UTC]
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JoeToon901 In reply to XthernusAndi [2021-12-21 11:54:05 +0000 UTC]
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camolotthe10 [2017-03-06 08:15:49 +0000 UTC]
My OC: "Sure, you're hot. And, if it goes a little farther... well, then."
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DragonKingAlpha [2016-09-12 05:04:47 +0000 UTC]
Flash Fire: * Holding out cold Twilight.* It's okay dear we can com back when the little dork stops being a weirdo. Don't worry He is not our son he is not our son.
Me: Uh could we have a motherly interruption here this is getting crazy. Also I do not see how this world Twilight is okay with her son doing this.
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Lavamoon0 [2016-03-07 17:53:16 +0000 UTC]
My oc would most likely pause in surprise, then kick out his legs and kick him into a wall as he was falling. Though it sucks for her because she is a massive hybrid and when i say that she is a crystal Pegasus who has some form of demon in her genetics and some sort of ice elemental in her genetics.
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DemonicLucario [2015-10-17 21:29:16 +0000 UTC]
Ok, I've think we've bailed enough water out of tis ship. I think it'll float now.
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Roger1234567 [2015-06-23 06:18:23 +0000 UTC]
I think it's hilarious just how upfront Alter is about all this.
He is completely innocent about all this, just "For Science" and how he gets Sparity all worked up without even trying.
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Yami-Marik93 [2015-05-06 14:53:14 +0000 UTC]
Does this mean he has to kiss a guy to get data?
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Yami-Marik93 In reply to vavacung [2015-05-06 15:25:54 +0000 UTC]
oh my on awkward scene but i am sure every character will be alright now since they all get along no matter what you are
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Sturmlion1 [2015-04-25 03:39:38 +0000 UTC]
He showed up and tried to kiss me, he would get a shotgun to the noggin.
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lilapplegirl [2015-04-25 01:19:21 +0000 UTC]
Twi, your kid has problems. Being Pan sexual isn't one of them
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Holy-Angel-Mithos [2015-03-08 21:13:27 +0000 UTC]
Wow this is sparking ideas for my dusk series, Dawn is alot like Dusk I like him. XD
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nuke1007 In reply to ocaptrong [2015-03-01 03:28:11 +0000 UTC]
no, remember it's all for science. some of us would have our balls chopped off it it meant we would find the chemical formula for photosynthisis
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GolliatTaillog [2015-02-04 03:03:16 +0000 UTC]
"Only if you let me push an ice cylinder into your ear 'till it melts, deal?"
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mirtar34 [2015-01-23 22:08:08 +0000 UTC]
I'm surprised he hasn't risen an angry mob on him at this point. There's gotta be a better way of gathering info than this, better yet, how can his mom approve of this behavior?
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mirtar34 In reply to WorldWalker128 [2015-01-26 03:06:30 +0000 UTC]
Science also corrupts you know, which makes me wonder....
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ShadowBr0ny [2015-01-20 00:07:36 +0000 UTC]
Apparently, social standards do not exist within his mind. He defiantly the son of Twilight.
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dragonbonehunter [2015-01-19 18:00:43 +0000 UTC]
........................................... 0_0................... tilt
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