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Published: 2015-01-16 20:28:46 +0000 UTC; Views: 73254; Favourites: 561; Downloads: 270
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Description "It's not like I never tried to ask for permission before. I tried. But nopony let me kiss them after that and I never have chance to kiss them anymore. That's why I have to use this method "Surprise Kiss Target => Avoid Target => Wait until target clam down => Explain the reason to target."

"Anyway, It's seem like someone though that I am the one who made all of OCs Commission Cards. You are misunderstood, humans. I am not the one who created them. I am not the one who kiss all of that OCs. The ponies I was kiss will have the cards like this"

vavacung.deviantart.com/galler…

"You can see. same background, same magic circle. It's mean It was made by the same caster. Please understand........You heard me, right humans?.........Mom! I'm done with breaking 4th wall now. Can you repair it for me, please?" ___ Alternate Dawn

"Please use 4th wall gate next time, my son. This wall really hard to repair, you know!?!" __ Twilight Sparkle

Shipping and Descendant Warning :
Spike X Rarity(Nightmare pony) = Sparity(Daughter)
Pinkie Pie X ??? = Super Surprise(Descendant)
(Spifire X Soarin) X (Daring Do X Ahuizotl) = Aerial Ace(Descendant)
Big Macintosh X Fluttershy = Apple Eden (Descendant)
Twilight Sparkle X -- Top Secret -- = Alternate Dawn(Son)

Alternate Dawn Card Collection => vavacung.deviantart.com/galler…

Warning : This story takes place 100 years after Rarity dead. This story base on season 4. So anything that happened in season 5 will have nothing to do with this story.

Warning : This story's an alternate universe and is really crazy at times. Futa-spell or the magic that can make female pony impregnate another female pony doesn't exist.

Warning : a lot of 4th wall breaking and referencing. Sharing universe with "To Love God - To Love Mortal" but in the future and more crazy. *You don't need to read "To Love God - To Love Mortal" to understand this story. It's just have many Easter egg for that story here.*

If you confused about chronology of this story, You can watch this timeline to help you => vavacung.deviantart.com/art/Cr…

English Editor : dracoblair.deviantart.com/

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Comments: 304

barduk4 In reply to ??? [2015-01-16 23:34:41 +0000 UTC]

women are so complicated

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PandaBearStorm129 In reply to barduk4 [2015-01-16 23:48:45 +0000 UTC]

Shhh, just embrace it. <3

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barduk4 In reply to PandaBearStorm129 [2015-01-18 10:12:22 +0000 UTC]

i try ;-;

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MewTora17 [2015-01-16 23:24:27 +0000 UTC]

Please, let's said yes, since he's asked!

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Cuppachincream In reply to ??? [2015-01-16 23:22:52 +0000 UTC]

ship em now

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SnowflakeThePony337 [2015-01-16 23:19:49 +0000 UTC]

I keep imagining sparity with purple hair...

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anideterm3 In reply to SnowflakeThePony337 [2015-01-16 23:27:56 +0000 UTC]

She has green hair.

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SnowflakeThePony337 In reply to anideterm3 [2015-01-17 06:55:26 +0000 UTC]

like I DEFINITLEY haven't seen the card, genius... a reason of why I said I keep imagining her with purple hair

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anideterm3 In reply to ??? [2015-01-16 23:17:41 +0000 UTC]

And if he tries to kiss Rarity (for being nightmare infused pony even if he doesn't tell immediately or seems interesting) and Spike (for being a tame and grown dragon) that'll make things even more awkward. Also Twilight must be feeling embarassed for Sparity and Rarity to encounter and find out about Alternate Dawn's habits.

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TheDragonWarlock In reply to ??? [2015-01-16 23:08:38 +0000 UTC]

Later that day, Alternate Dawn is in the hospital and being treated for 3rd degree burns all over his body.

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TravisBlack1997 In reply to ??? [2015-01-16 23:03:28 +0000 UTC]

Smooth

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anideterm3 In reply to ??? [2015-01-16 22:56:19 +0000 UTC]

*sigh* He is so dense scientifically (too scientific making him a little social awkward when he does certain things for science) for asking for another kiss again from a different form so soon. And something tells me mama Twilight has mixed feelings with his surprise kiss method and/or his card making requiring a kiss on the lips. In other words Dawn that is bad timing so you better run for your sake not just from her but from Twilight (maybe), Sparity's mother Rarity (Nightmare), and Sparity's father Spike (if he finds out cue protective dragon father instincts). And its likely different now since he already kissed her without permission that asking for permission this time wouldn't have much merit/politeness after so little time. What would Sparity do in response for a request for a second kiss a slap, a kick in his *****, or something else?

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Laughingwar In reply to ??? [2015-01-16 22:56:06 +0000 UTC]

Oops!...she did it again.

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anideterm3 In reply to Laughingwar [2015-01-16 23:06:56 +0000 UTC]

She's not Britney Spears LOL. 

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Laughingwar In reply to anideterm3 [2015-01-16 23:37:58 +0000 UTC]

I know, but it just reminded me of it XD

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Karach0s In reply to ??? [2015-01-16 22:55:48 +0000 UTC]

I hafta try sweet-talking some girls into kissing in the name of science too...

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TCPolecat7 In reply to ??? [2015-01-16 22:54:40 +0000 UTC]

bluff called....

- Polecat

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AdventurePonyBTP In reply to ??? [2015-01-16 22:49:19 +0000 UTC]

POPCORN!

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AceFedora In reply to AdventurePonyBTP [2015-01-16 22:53:28 +0000 UTC]

i will take some.

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AdventurePonyBTP In reply to AceFedora [2015-01-17 02:24:11 +0000 UTC]

Okie dokie.

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TammyTheSlenderGirl In reply to ??? [2015-01-16 22:47:43 +0000 UTC]

wow....CAN HE KISS ME

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danielkolmom In reply to ??? [2015-01-16 22:37:13 +0000 UTC]

Well, sparity, its your own foul XP

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Solarpony21 In reply to ??? [2015-01-16 22:35:59 +0000 UTC]

Damn... this guy... Way to start/destroy the most intense Relationship in the world... 

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MalphLink In reply to ??? [2015-01-16 22:14:12 +0000 UTC]

Has she a dragon form?

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ChaoticNote In reply to MalphLink [2015-01-16 22:22:20 +0000 UTC]

3 comic pages ago.

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locuas In reply to MalphLink [2015-01-16 22:19:40 +0000 UTC]

they showed it like three comics ago

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Drakenhof In reply to ??? [2015-01-16 22:10:51 +0000 UTC]

Give that ponie a cookie

An all this, in front of their mothers. Wonderful.

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RainbowDashieMLPFan In reply to ??? [2015-01-16 22:10:16 +0000 UTC]

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MoonOfSouls In reply to RainbowDashieMLPFan [2015-01-16 23:50:37 +0000 UTC]

I agree.

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RainbowDashieMLPFan In reply to MoonOfSouls [2015-01-16 23:57:43 +0000 UTC]

She said yes to letting him kiss her if he asked so let the ship sail

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MoonOfSouls In reply to RainbowDashieMLPFan [2015-01-17 00:32:22 +0000 UTC]

What kind of ship would be best for this though? Are we talking about a Titanic or a row boat?

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RainbowDashieMLPFan In reply to MoonOfSouls [2015-01-17 00:56:28 +0000 UTC]

Not the Titanic! Lil

Luxury cruise line XD

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MoonOfSouls In reply to RainbowDashieMLPFan [2015-01-17 01:00:58 +0000 UTC]

Oh! Luxury cruise line! That sounds like a plan. We need to throw a bottle of whiskey or something at it to wish it luck! Of course these are ponies so maybe apple cider would be more appropriate. :3

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RainbowDashieMLPFan In reply to MoonOfSouls [2015-01-17 01:01:34 +0000 UTC]

X3 yep

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MoonOfSouls In reply to RainbowDashieMLPFan [2015-01-17 01:06:17 +0000 UTC]

Ooh! I can't wait for this! So exciting~ X3

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RainbowDashieMLPFan In reply to MoonOfSouls [2015-01-17 01:12:32 +0000 UTC]

Yep

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SlickDestro [2015-01-16 22:01:05 +0000 UTC]

XD

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Hotspot-the-626th In reply to ??? [2015-01-16 21:53:50 +0000 UTC]

I already support this shipping

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NCbrony In reply to ??? [2015-01-16 21:48:21 +0000 UTC]

Give this guy a medal. 

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TheRussBus In reply to NCbrony [2015-01-16 22:01:27 +0000 UTC]

imgusr.tradekey.com/p-B4273487…

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GuyverLord In reply to ??? [2015-01-16 21:40:18 +0000 UTC]

This dude deserves to be gelded.  Without any anesthetic.

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BBBHuey In reply to GuyverLord [2015-01-17 10:37:52 +0000 UTC]

Yeah! And he needs to be castrated too!

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GuyverLord In reply to BBBHuey [2015-01-17 19:26:16 +0000 UTC]

HA! 

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BBBHuey In reply to GuyverLord [2015-01-18 02:08:11 +0000 UTC]

 

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MissLazzy In reply to ??? [2015-01-16 21:36:42 +0000 UTC]

Sparity... You just get into a trap c:

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anideterm3 In reply to MissLazzy [2015-01-16 23:08:37 +0000 UTC]

His trap card to be exact "bold request statement" that causes the opponent to blush with 50-50 chance of skipping their turn when triggered or cause a random action/attack.
LOL

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RebornAnimalz [2015-01-16 21:32:08 +0000 UTC]

Heh, Sparity now what are you gonna do?

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VentodelCaos [2015-01-16 21:29:39 +0000 UTC]

 Busted!  

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Zeroxee [2015-01-16 21:29:14 +0000 UTC]

That was... straight forward saying...

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nikuchanprime In reply to ??? [2015-01-16 21:28:11 +0000 UTC]

I have no words. Just laughs. UST strong being two these in.

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