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Verwildert β€” Elora- Contest

Published: 2006-01-19 07:31:21 +0000 UTC; Views: 489; Favourites: 6; Downloads: 39
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Description For =Neolucky 's contest, my first character.

Creator's Name: Verwildert

Year: 3034

Characters Name: Elora

Sex: Female

Race: Human

Age: 41

Hair: platinum

Skin: white

Clothing: Skin tight, state-of-the-art spacewear, designed for heavy wear and tear and made to last, while still showing off ones curves.

Accessories: Body armour and high-tech space widgetry.

Weapon: Disintegrating, de-molecularising space gun.

Personality: Smart, with a fiery spirit and, of course, a burning desire for justice and peace.

Back story: Elora let loose a string of alien curses as another blast from her persuers barely missed her small spacecraft. Despite only 4 years as a pilot, she handled the ship like a 10-year graduate from Flight University. The recruiters from the Galactic Police Academy saw her talent, dedication and desire for peace and justice, so she became the youngest recruited officer, at only 41 years of age. Her parents had both been high-level officers and had both died in the field, while hunting out pirates.
Elora thought that she might go the same way, as she weaved in and out, swept high and dove low, trying to shake both the murderous pirates and bounty hunters, who weren't about to give up their quarry. A moment too late, Elora swung hard to the left and the right thruster took the photon missile full-on. Elora had been outrunning the pirates and bounty hunters for hours, her fuel was low and her ship had taken a beating. Now, far off course and without reasonable means of excape, she spiraled helplessly toward a dark planet. She gasped as she realised which planet it was.. and now she was being drawn toward it, caught in it's unrelenting pull.
Yassta Berrin: the planet shrouded in darkness. It had lured countless numbers of explorers in, but nothing was known about it's surface for no one who went down ever came back up. Sensing her fate and spiraling out of control, Elora let go of the ships controls and watched the darkness rushing toward her at a frightening speed. She saw a shimmer and flash of light as she entered the planet’s atmosphere. The ship ablaze in the front, and now from the back as the thrusters burst into flames, Elora was only faintly aware of the encroaching darkness. Her mind numbed and her vision blurred as the darkness quickly became overwhelming, and all she could feel was the cold and dizzying spin of falling, and all she knew was the dark.
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I haven't written in years and I'm dead tired... it will have to do for now. Tell me what you think of the character, won't you?
Oh, and it's open to colouring... to all and any, just link and credit me or suffer the full extent of my wrath, etc...
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Comments: 34

Caipirina [2006-01-25 23:20:25 +0000 UTC]

awesome!

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scars-and-stripes [2006-01-22 00:33:55 +0000 UTC]

Well isn't she just a bundle of smexiness? Elora, as in, Elora Dannan, or whatever her name is, from Willow?

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Verwildert In reply to scars-and-stripes [2006-01-24 20:47:12 +0000 UTC]

Elora minus the Dannan or whatever her name is. When I was drawing her for some reason, that name kept popping into my head. I couldn't remember what the name was from either, but it just sort of stuck, and I think it sort of suits her. Just sort of.

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scars-and-stripes In reply to Verwildert [2006-01-25 04:31:36 +0000 UTC]

un poco. I want to make tarts.

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Verwildert In reply to scars-and-stripes [2006-01-25 23:46:08 +0000 UTC]

You are a tart.

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scars-and-stripes In reply to Verwildert [2006-01-26 01:05:40 +0000 UTC]

Yes... I want to... procreate. I'm sorry, didn't I make it clear enough?

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Penril [2006-01-21 05:41:54 +0000 UTC]

Free for coloring huh?....mmmmhhh *ponders* Her butt is totally uncovered? O_O

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Verwildert In reply to Penril [2006-01-21 06:15:44 +0000 UTC]

NOOOOOOOOOOOOO. Jeebus McChrist people, it's called a space suit. I just didn't shade it.
!!!!!!!

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Penril In reply to Verwildert [2006-01-21 06:27:07 +0000 UTC]

OOOOHHHHH that's veeery clearing....maybe cold tones with green and blue.....

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choirgirl7 [2006-01-20 03:49:44 +0000 UTC]

Of course I was the inspiration for the character...right?

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Verwildert In reply to choirgirl7 [2006-01-24 20:48:08 +0000 UTC]

Of course! I thought that was obvious.... need you ask? Really now...

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Aerten [2006-01-20 00:47:39 +0000 UTC]

erm...is there any skin showing besides her face? Cause I was looking at her arm thinking it's prob part of her suit thingy mabob..

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Verwildert In reply to Aerten [2006-01-21 07:34:42 +0000 UTC]

And I didn't add any fabric folds... but you probably don't care too much about that. XD

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Aerten In reply to Verwildert [2006-01-22 05:00:41 +0000 UTC]

What do you think of it so far? (I have a version in my scraps)

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Verwildert In reply to Aerten [2006-01-21 07:31:37 +0000 UTC]

Her space suit offers complete skin coverage and there's body armour over that. Plus needless accessories.

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lilie-morhiril [2006-01-19 21:36:08 +0000 UTC]

41 years?°° well, she is bring very well her years!she seems more younger^^

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Verwildert In reply to lilie-morhiril [2006-01-24 20:49:51 +0000 UTC]

People in the year 3034 age much better than they do now-a-days... 40 is really more like 20 years... of course, it all depends on lifestyle too.

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lilie-morhiril In reply to Verwildert [2006-01-24 21:14:10 +0000 UTC]

ohh I understand!!! I didn't know that she lives in 3034 age^^

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Verwildert In reply to lilie-morhiril [2006-01-24 21:29:21 +0000 UTC]

Maybe I forgot to mention that...

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lilie-morhiril In reply to Verwildert [2006-01-24 23:30:44 +0000 UTC]

hahaha maybe...
but don't worry^^ the important things is that it's a good drawing^^

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crackaboo [2006-01-19 18:43:09 +0000 UTC]

I think her butt might get cold in this winter weather.

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Verwildert In reply to crackaboo [2006-01-21 06:17:23 +0000 UTC]

She's wearing a space suit, you know?

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ravunn [2006-01-19 18:34:14 +0000 UTC]

I liked the background story alot. it's definately video game worthy... hell you'll have it in the store you work in in no time

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JimField [2006-01-19 09:21:05 +0000 UTC]

Ohh very cheeky, love it

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Verwildert In reply to JimField [2006-01-24 20:50:42 +0000 UTC]

Pff.... ha ha. I should have finished this completely and put some folds into her clothing.

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self-replica [2006-01-19 08:14:58 +0000 UTC]

I see you're also playing into Neo's natural talents with lithe sexy females...devious!

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Verwildert In reply to self-replica [2006-01-19 08:58:59 +0000 UTC]

I am, amn't I? Though it was unintentional. I have a hard time drawing curvy, lumpy women. ;__; I should work on that.

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self-replica In reply to Verwildert [2006-01-19 15:40:44 +0000 UTC]

Talk to Bo, he likes lumpy women ^^

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Verwildert In reply to self-replica [2006-01-19 19:40:14 +0000 UTC]

I am well aware. -.-

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self-replica In reply to Verwildert [2006-01-19 19:54:52 +0000 UTC]

Oh why the -_- face? Don't like lumpy?

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Verwildert In reply to self-replica [2006-01-19 20:07:25 +0000 UTC]

Heh heh, no it's not that. I have no problem with a little flesh on the bones, it's just that Bo mentions quite often that he likes lumpy women.

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Aerten [2006-01-19 07:34:27 +0000 UTC]

Kewl..is her bum naked? *gasp* scandalous!

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Aerten In reply to Aerten [2006-01-19 07:35:35 +0000 UTC]

or maybe that's pants...

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Verwildert In reply to Aerten [2006-01-19 07:35:23 +0000 UTC]

Ha ha... no, unfortunately, it's not. It's all about the skin-tight spacewear, oohhhhh yeahhhh.....

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