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VisualModality — Dedication to EE Cummings Poem

Published: 2009-04-07 22:52:02 +0000 UTC; Views: 464; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 0
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Description i like my body when it is with your


i like my body when it is with your body.
It is so quite new a thing.
Muscles better and nerves more.
i like your body. i like what it does,
i like its hows. i like to feel the spine
of your body and its bones, and the trembling
-firm-smoothness and which i will again and again and again kiss, i like kissing this and that of you,
i like, slowly stroking the, shocking fuzz
of your electric fur, and what-is-it comes
over parting flesh ... And eyes big love-crumbs,
and possibly i like the thrill of under me you
so quite new

..ee cummings

Again started in Daz Studio and grew on with filters
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Comments: 4

LeoPorter [2009-04-11 04:41:56 +0000 UTC]

Overall

Vision

Originality

Technique

Impact


Great work! The Impact is complimented by the poem. Technique is useful and not too overpowering. the vision and originality were not 5 stars only because several pieces like this already exist, your spin on it though creates a good impact.

Only thing would say would be bottom right corner a hint of off color that i think is slightly distracting upon overall viewing of the piece.

Great work. I would like to see a set of these styles, or various parts of the body from you. Like heads, legs, etc. Maybe when put together it can create a huge mural body?

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davincipoppalag [2009-04-07 23:23:30 +0000 UTC]

Perfect image for that poem.. wonderful work

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VisualModality In reply to davincipoppalag [2009-04-07 23:44:36 +0000 UTC]

Thank you..I had entered that at the time to a contest about the poet

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davincipoppalag In reply to VisualModality [2009-04-07 23:48:21 +0000 UTC]

Cool

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