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Published: 2015-07-21 23:40:43 +0000 UTC; Views: 1011; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 19
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This story sets the stage of The Wonder Room, a swanky, modern bar in Tabira, and introduces its entertaining staff as well as one of its customers: Resin , the guard captain of the Keepers.
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Comments: 7
chicoARTS [2015-07-24 02:35:03 +0000 UTC]
Nice story, ghost! You described the characters very well, not only with adjectives but with actions as well. I smiled at the play on words you did with the Quilava on the dancefloor and the personification of the Great Tree. Although I felt that the intensity of the story that built up through Rocko's performance plummeted abruptly after the Gligar event. Anyways, it was a good story to introduce characters! Good job!
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voyagerwitch In reply to chicoARTS [2015-07-24 05:55:40 +0000 UTC]
thank you very much! that's a very valid point, and i'll be sure to consider it in the future!
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chicoARTS In reply to voyagerwitch [2015-07-24 15:17:36 +0000 UTC]
The rhymes in the song are fine too, but it's hard for me to imagine the rhythm hehe
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Violet-Kitsune-Lila [2015-07-23 15:59:41 +0000 UTC]
This is the cutest thing I've ever read *claps my hands together*
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voyagerwitch In reply to Violet-Kitsune-Lila [2015-07-23 17:53:51 +0000 UTC]
omg, thank you! i'm glad you enjoyed it!
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