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Vyrosk In reply to canisaries [2017-03-02 22:47:16 +0000 UTC]

thank you a lot and sure even though I know where my mistakes are , I never mind about hearing critique from other perspective ! 

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canisaries In reply to Vyrosk [2017-03-03 13:57:55 +0000 UTC]

great!
so, like i said, colors are great, as is the contrast, but there are a few details that bother me. i can see from your other work that the long, pointy snout is part of your style and aesthetic, so it's fine, but with that said i think the eyes and snout should still line up. what i mean by this is that the head seems to be tilted (posture and eyes), but the snout seems to not be tilted (nose and teeth).

next, the fur texture and flow is good, but it seems a bit flat on the neck, as it was more of a pattern than 3D fur. i think one way to fix that would be to make the shadows between the fur clumps a bit darker and sharper, kind of like how they are on the forearms.

the final thing i wanna comment on is how the right forearm (from the character's perspective, to the arm on the left to us) seems a bit long compared to the upper arm. this is because of perspective, of course, but to me the upper arm doesn't look like its bent enough to be the same length as the forearm in actuality. i think it would look better if the wrinkles of the shirt on the upper arm were more round... it's hard to explain what i mean, but it would look like the upper arm was more towards the viewer and foreshortened.

but to be fair i'm not that great at perspective myself so who am i to talk :P anyway, i looked at the rest of your gallery too, some really great works there and all of them are pleasing to the eyes :D i especially like the way you use blur. your drawings/paintings are very dynamic too.

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