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Of course it looks like overalls, she lives in a barn 
And letβs hope Jasper has the good sense to tactically withdraw away from the city.
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I like the manikin look to Peridot as she's regenerating. I don't why, but it just fits.
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Peridot's uniform makes me think of a jumpsuit. It's a bit odd, but it suits her.
The glow on Steven's face is well drawn, and it's nice to see Peridot's limb enhancers float towards her while she reforms. She even said thanks.
The expressions are nicely detailed, and the loud stomps show another sign of danger. If they decided to fuse, then they have no right to speak. The decision to put three birds flying closely together in the first panel is a nice touch. Great job.
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Thanks for all your nice comments
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Question will you include Bismuth in this AU?
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Short answer: Sadly not.
Long answer: There was no way I could have planned for her to be included, and the story is almostΒ over (two more pages after this). There is also an epilogue, but that's solely focused on tying up loose ends from the main plot and there's no room to introduce new elements.
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okay thanks 
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Shoving something like that into a story late almost never works. I know I couldn't pull it off here so I'm not gonna try
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Eh, it's a little too one-color for me. The stars are nice, though.
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*solemnly takes off hat in Jasper's memory*
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There were a few hints in panel 3 of page V-19, but some other readers have already figured it out
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I figured hehr, they were being tooooo clingy xD
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Bawh
Bawh
Bawh~Sans playing his trombone
Sans plaguing my life with incidental music~ Papyrus
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Nice touch letting her form with her limb enhancers,
Also keeping it canon with her saying "wow, thanks"
Now when jasper said she'll talk to the others, do you
mean lapis and bismuth or there fusion forms? I assume
it's a fusion doing the yelling lol.
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There are no others around other than Garnet, Pearl and Amethyst, becuase Lapis is away and there was no way I could have planned for Bismuth, so in this verse they haven't even found her yet. Other readers have figured out who it is, so just look around
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My bad, I feel very foolish for writing that.
But I do have an idea of whom it is.Β I re-read
the last few pages, let's see if I get it this time.
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No worries
The answer will be revealed on page V-22 ^_^
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Clean lines, and inspired by her environment
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she lives near the gems, not in jail
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It's not a jail uniform, it's based on a combo of overalls and a flight suit.
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Exactly
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