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wheelforlife — A weird journey 1
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For a first try, it was really good 
I'm not sure to be able to actually give you advices on your writing, but I'd say that maybe leaving a line break sometimes or making more, smaller paragraphs could help to read your texts more smoothly.
Anyway, it was a great story and I'm eager to read the next chapter !
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