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Published: 2014-12-12 07:33:42 +0000 UTC; Views: 3258; Favourites: 53; Downloads: 21
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Oooh, Tomoda as an scp sounds lovely x3
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MG: *Notices hallway with 'her' in it* I ain't goin' over there, nahp. HMMHMM. I AIN'T WALKIN' INTO SHIET. NOPE. NO! ABSOLUTELY NOT.
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This is an incredibly stupid question but...
Can we start an RP?
(I HAVE NOTHING ELSE TO DO IN LIFE.)
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*CUE SAD VIOLIN*
(jk it's alright.)
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Why don't you come play with us? There is a lot of room inside, we are not going to hurt you, we could have such a great time together.
We have so many toys and we know so many games, but all this is nothing if you don't come.
We would love to have you around, we could play forever.
We won't let you end like the ones before.
We will be sad if you don't come.
We are lonely without you.
We need you.
Miss you.
You.
The hallway is awesome, the perspective and the shading, it is obvious but I need to say it, it really gives that distance feel. The hallway just seems so long, yet ghostly being at the end of it seems so close. Tomoda sitting there and pointing her blood stained hoof, knowing smile appearing on her face as the blood continues to pour down from her eyes.
The blood marks, clearly pointing that some unfortunate thing has been dragged down the hallway's length, fighting for its life with the little strength it has got left. Life spilling with every meter, the essence of it staining the concrete. Establishing its last stand at the doorway where it put all hope and all force into breaking free from the nightmare that was happening in reality. To no avail.
And once the echoes of heart breaking screams fade away, once the hallway is dry and stained, once the darkness behind the doorway speaks again with the voice it has been denied for so long, the unfortunate being reappears, lost and confused but happy to be not alone, to have a visitor to play with. Until she realizes who the visitor is.
"You."
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This comment.... I downright love it. You paid attention to every aspect of it... I am speechless....like....speechless.... just sitting here smiling at my phone...lovely
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Don't forget that the comment has been brought by your stunning art. It was like a spark, like ignition. It struck the correct strings.
The title itself was a good starting point, but then I noticed there is no description. Provocative.
I am glad you like it so much, I enjoyed writing it while looking at the scene depicted there.
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that's it, you get comment of the week.
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Patrick Star - I Don't Get It - YouTube Who's the pony in the picture?
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Its my ghost pony OC :3 she's a.....ghost :3
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Thanks! I am trying to create a sense of bathophobia, which is a fear of deeply dimensioned volumes like long hallways and such
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Adding a sense of uneasy feeling to the viewers I like it good to hear from you
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''She just sits there...sometimes i wonder if there is anything left?''
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"Maybe there is..maybe there isnt....why dont you go take a look..?"
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do long dark creepy hallway...with ominous lighting...what a great idea...whom ever idea it was should go first...
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That means I should go first, doesnt it...? Why dont you go first? *pushes you forward*
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*slams feet on the ground...turns around and gentally pushes you in front*
oh please by all means i insist
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*slides underneath you and pushes you forward more*
Oh dont be shy..
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*why dont we go together...as i walk forward with you
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Thats fine...as long as you stay in front of me
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*oh please together i insist...*making us completely level on our path
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But im sure she was pointing at you in the first place, dear *slightly puts you in front*
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"how can you tell...she seems to be pointina t both of us"...pushed you up with me
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Nonono look *points* she's pointing at you more specifically
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oh come now...your not scared are you...*as i push us together faster down the hall*
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Can I contact her with a cellphone? Oh wait, that's not Calling.
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Besides, I dont think she knows how a cellphone works, haha
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Can I at least approach?
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I would nominate... Vince to go down that hallway first!
Creepy ass hallway of death... And I love it... But fear it.
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Inducing fear is one thing I always love to do...it feels incredible when I succeed
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So Vince goes and dies or lives first right?
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