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Published: 2018-01-31 02:24:17 +0000 UTC; Views: 1748; Favourites: 58; Downloads: 0
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Love Letters from the Crypt
For my Valentine on
Come play with us.
There’s a total of 800 hidden behind random numbers
Like a Moth to flame I am drawn to you.
Like a needle-- a pin prick to the heart; so is your love..
No matter how far apart.
Dusty wings shake off the dirt;
You mere words take away my hurt.
Tiny flutters flapping, clumsy and weak.
It is your flaws that I truly seek.
We came from the darkness, burried deep.
Such is the moth, dirty and beat.
Drawn to the flame, just the same.
So is your whispering words that drive me insane.
Wrapped in a cacoon of dout, your empathy sought me out.
With awkward flight I make my move with plight.
I'm swooping closer. Closer to your bright light.
Along the lilted breeze, I beg of you..
Keep me please.
Dribbling blood down my chin, is loving you such a sin?
For I'll bleed for you-- My valentine.
For its never enough; No length of time.
Stock Credits
Mouth:Lips 2
Blood:
www.freepngimg.com/miscellaneo…
www.freepngimg.com/png/6328-bl…
www.freepngimg.com/png/6351-bl…
Texture:Showna-Stock Cracked Bench 2
Moth:www.rgbstock.com/photo/mmewD52…
Anything else used is from my own personal stock collection
Please ask for permission if you'd like to use any of my creations. Only because I'd like to know how far it travels. Otherwise; so long as you ask ahead of time, credit me and leave a link to my page and the original graphic-- the usage of my work shall be permitted with honors.
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Comments: 40
Pretty neat stuff you're going for! I'm a little off-put by the difference in resolution/blur between the cracks and the mouth itself, not to mention how the cracks go over the pins, but in spite of its flaws it's an excellent portrayal of the dark feelings you're trying to portray.
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I thought I got all the cracks off of the pins but I see where I might have left a tid bit on one of them. It is going to drive me crazy now. Lol
When you say difference in resolution what exactly do you mean? As for the blur, I did try and fix that. Unfortunately one of the textures I used caused most of the blur but I was determined to use it bc I got the best results for what I was going for. Which from what you say I was still able to accomplish. So thank you. I am glad that was still able to come across in the end.
I appreciate your feedback very much! I am always trying to better myself and I think my work has come a long way since I created this one but I am always up for critiques so I can be the best that I can possibly be. So I really appreciate you taking out the time to help.
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I generally get a bit cheesed off about weird blur in general, which is why I'm not a huge fan of gratuitous motion and Gaussian blur.
Regardless, I wouldn't worry too much on it. Redoing the cracks a bit and ever so slightly sharpening the mouth opening is what I would do.
I'm glad you appreciate the critique. I'm hoping to improve myself and others with kind words.
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pleasure my friend
have a wonderful day ...
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Ouch! This looks like it could hurt a bit
Amazing work, dear
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