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Description The fist in the 100 challenge. This picture doesn't make sense without the story and the story doesn't make sense without the picture, so I'm keeping the two of them together, meaning I won't be posting these on ff.net. The stoy's 100 words exactly, which is a lot harder then it sounds.

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Irritated, the girl eyed the hat in the tree, which the wind had just blown off. Too stubborn to let it go, she circled the tree until she found leverage, faltering when she saw how high it was. But pride overruled judgment, and she climbed to retrieve her possession…

SNAP!

Plummeting, she screamed only to be caught midair, and the girl stared at her savoir in awe as he retrieved her hat.

“Lilith?” Grinning at the surprise on her mom’s face, Lilith waved.

“Mom!” She giggled, “Meet Phantom!” The ghost looked startled, before he smiled knowingly into violet eyes.

“Hello…”

Take it how you want it, people, you're not getting any more from me!!!

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WingsofMorphius In reply to ??? [2012-06-13 19:29:27 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! I honestly don't like this old thing anymore though, to tell you the truth...

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DannyXSam1999 [2012-02-26 15:00:05 +0000 UTC]

wow sam is beautiful...

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WingsofMorphius In reply to DannyXSam1999 [2012-02-26 16:35:18 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! ^^ I can see her growing out of the goth thing eventually and settling on a more natural, open look for herself.

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Raygreens [2011-06-30 00:10:18 +0000 UTC]

something tells me that you like tomboys

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WingsofMorphius In reply to Raygreens [2011-06-30 00:37:52 +0000 UTC]

No more then any other archetype. As a writer, I find them all interesting on some level.

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Raygreens In reply to WingsofMorphius [2011-06-30 01:05:17 +0000 UTC]

ok, It just seems you really like Dani and you gave Sam a tomboy daughter in this picture

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WingsofMorphius In reply to Raygreens [2011-06-30 01:48:46 +0000 UTC]

Ah. It's true that Dani's one of my favorite characters to work with, but so are Valerie, Paulina, Mr. Lancer, Vlad... So I don't really have a 'type' that's my favorite. XD

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Raygreens In reply to WingsofMorphius [2011-06-30 01:55:27 +0000 UTC]

I suppose

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everhearted [2011-05-04 00:54:28 +0000 UTC]

wow. just, wow.

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WingsofMorphius In reply to everhearted [2011-05-04 02:30:47 +0000 UTC]

thank you! XD

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Violet-Violence [2007-12-06 03:41:56 +0000 UTC]

i don't understand the plot! whats going on?

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WingsofMorphius In reply to Violet-Violence [2007-12-06 12:47:17 +0000 UTC]

XD It's just a 100 word story about the picture above... doesn't really make sense. Sorry!

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Violet-Violence In reply to WingsofMorphius [2007-12-06 19:09:28 +0000 UTC]

so then, whos the kid?

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WingsofMorphius In reply to Violet-Violence [2007-12-07 14:22:59 +0000 UTC]

Just and OC I made up to be Sam's daughter... I left it up to others to decide if she was Dnny'sas well.

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Violet-Violence In reply to WingsofMorphius [2007-12-07 14:46:52 +0000 UTC]

probaly, looks kinda like jazz

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WingsofMorphius In reply to Violet-Violence [2007-12-07 15:52:52 +0000 UTC]

Sam's mom is a redhead, which is why I kinda made her daughter one...

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Violet-Violence In reply to WingsofMorphius [2007-12-07 16:09:14 +0000 UTC]

i can see how that makes sense

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fayry12 [2007-07-28 18:28:39 +0000 UTC]

Graet Pic

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Maialean [2007-02-09 04:54:59 +0000 UTC]

It's been months since this piece of suspense has been posted and still you have yet to reveal the whole story, WoM. Promise you will some day ( But I'd understand if you couldn't. With that creative head of yours, there's no telling)? This picture, and the side stroy, has a lot of potential. And with the way you write, I'm sure it'd be REAL good, and even those who aren't fond of fute fics would be absorbed.
Now, for the image. Danny looks mighty fine in that new suit of his. And the expression, gods. You know, I ALWAYS picture future Danny with long hair pulled into a pony tail... it just makes sense, in an odd way . I'm almost positive he would. He looks the type. And Sam, she's so pretty, and shapey, and all. And motherly. Oh, and I must comment of your brillance on the redhead. Many people do not consider that children have a slim possibilty of inheriting a different color of eyes and/or hair from other members of the family than just the parents themselves. So it's a nice change to not see a dark-haired as a child of Sam's---and maybe even Danny's? Riiiiight. Not revealing anything. Anyway, I look forward to seeing an after-story to this.

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WingsofMorphius In reply to Maialean [2007-02-09 13:40:04 +0000 UTC]

...I wasn't going to put this in any story. The point was for it to be a 100 word one shot that could be taken any which way. I wasn't planning on doing anything more with this, or my other 100 Challenge peices

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Maialean In reply to WingsofMorphius [2007-02-10 00:22:56 +0000 UTC]

Oh. Well that's a shame! But I understand now---at least I was able to enjoy the piece . You know, even in drawings and in a short amount of words---100!---were you able to drag me into a suspense. I guess I can only rely on my imagination for this, then. Great job, anyhow!

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CAA-DP-DA [2006-12-03 01:16:14 +0000 UTC]

Why does Lilith have red hair? I don't seem to recall any male on DP having red hair.

Except for Nathan...

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WingsofMorphius In reply to CAA-DP-DA [2006-12-03 02:21:47 +0000 UTC]

Sam's mom is a redhead.

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bronwyn140 [2006-08-27 13:05:15 +0000 UTC]

the dudes got a mullet xD in the normal shows he got a skullet.

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Maki-P [2006-07-03 19:33:24 +0000 UTC]

I have three words: I hate you.
this is so fascinating and you just say "you're not getting any more"!!!!!!!
You can't do that! You're evil!!!!

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WingsofMorphius In reply to Maki-P [2006-07-03 22:38:22 +0000 UTC]

Tough cookies!

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sane-in-insanity [2006-06-15 19:49:45 +0000 UTC]

I like the picture. Danny looks a bit too smug for his own good.
Sam? Sam's -child-? Oh this is pure evil. I demand more. MORE!

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WingsofMorphius In reply to sane-in-insanity [2006-06-15 19:53:58 +0000 UTC]

Read the warning under the story, dearie.

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kdm13 [2006-06-15 17:25:57 +0000 UTC]

It makes a lot more sence with the story, I looked at the picture and was like; what the?

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WingsofMorphius In reply to kdm13 [2006-06-15 17:44:44 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, that's why I had to put them up together like this. :bangs head into wall: 100 words exactly is HARD!!!!

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kdm13 In reply to WingsofMorphius [2006-06-15 17:45:58 +0000 UTC]

I didn't realise 100 words was so short.

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WingsofMorphius In reply to kdm13 [2006-06-15 17:47:02 +0000 UTC]

Tell me about it....

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kdm13 In reply to WingsofMorphius [2006-06-15 17:50:59 +0000 UTC]

I don't think I could do 100 words if I tried, I just go on and on and on and on...

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WingsofMorphius In reply to kdm13 [2006-06-15 17:55:19 +0000 UTC]

My, too. Back when I was updating everyday, quite a few people started calling me the energizer bunny of fanfiction. (Just keeps going and going and going...)

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kdm13 In reply to WingsofMorphius [2006-06-15 17:57:35 +0000 UTC]

It's more of conversations for me, since I have a problem with writer's block.

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toriga [2006-06-13 08:53:39 +0000 UTC]

So... if that's Sam's kid...

Who's the dad? O_o Or is that even important?


I dig this picture, especially the expressions on their faces. Good luck on the writing parts -- anything crammed down to a limit as low as 100 words is -hard-.

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WingsofMorphius In reply to toriga [2006-06-13 14:07:58 +0000 UTC]

So I've noticed @_@ Well, I've started on #2 but it's not done yet....

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jakanine [2006-06-12 08:53:22 +0000 UTC]

So, THAT'S your future Danny and Sam. Ah.

Notice you left Dark Dan's little gotee thing, though I would guess to know why. Must wonder how Danny's suit changed over time, but then again, maybe it's just something that does that: adjusts to what the wearer wants or something.

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WingsofMorphius In reply to jakanine [2006-06-12 13:45:19 +0000 UTC]

Hey, tastes change, right? Besides, Danny's gonna outgrow that thing sooner or later...

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rockersweetie13 [2006-06-12 05:01:10 +0000 UTC]

The suspense will kill me
Picture is awesome, as always ^^ I love the long hair @_@ It looks good on him

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WingsofMorphius In reply to rockersweetie13 [2006-06-12 14:11:32 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! Personally, his bemused expression is my favorite part of it.

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rockersweetie13 In reply to WingsofMorphius [2006-06-13 04:10:07 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, the expressions were all awesome ^^

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NobodyFamous [2006-06-12 04:27:14 +0000 UTC]

COOL! Too freakin cool! We've GOT to see more! The drawing is cute and the story is just too interesting on it's own, but even more so WITH the pic. Too bad you made it so short...

...WHY DO YOU TORMENT US SO?!! (Cries)

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WingsofMorphius In reply to NobodyFamous [2006-06-12 14:16:57 +0000 UTC]

like I said, 100 words exactly! I've already started the next one, it should be up before the week's out.)

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NobodyFamous In reply to WingsofMorphius [2006-06-13 04:56:51 +0000 UTC]

All right! I'll be keeping an eye out for it then.

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Melithia [2006-06-12 01:24:26 +0000 UTC]

These drawings of yours are making me burst with suspense! GREAT JOB! I can't wait till the story!!!

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WingsofMorphius In reply to Melithia [2006-06-12 01:47:51 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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Sanseui-Kitty [2006-06-11 23:55:23 +0000 UTC]

awesome. awesome. and danny looks hot with long hair

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WingsofMorphius In reply to Sanseui-Kitty [2006-06-12 01:51:08 +0000 UTC]

I think so, too. Then again, I find longer hair on guys to be hot.

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Sanseui-Kitty In reply to WingsofMorphius [2006-06-12 02:19:03 +0000 UTC]

me too.

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