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WordOfChen โ€” Unforgiven One
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Published: 2017-07-04 15:22:13 +0000 UTC; Views: 428; Favourites: 19; Downloads: 0
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Your sins may have come from a time before me,
but in the past is where my wounds shall always be.
And I will never forgive you for taking what belonged to me;
Even if you returned it in time.

For you dared to steal what I had earned,
You took the soul for which my heart yearned!
And now that you have finally been spurned;
It's time to pay the piper...

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Comments: 19

BrandonAtDeviantart [2017-07-05 13:33:17 +0000 UTC]

Hmm...... not really sure what I can grade it. Maybe a 4.0 out of 5, I suppose. Even so, it's a good one. I have favourited one of your stuff in the past, and it still remains.

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WordOfChen In reply to BrandonAtDeviantart [2017-07-06 05:10:09 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for enjoying my work friend ^^

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BrandonAtDeviantart In reply to WordOfChen [2017-07-06 07:01:31 +0000 UTC]

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JackalyenMystique [2017-07-05 05:31:09 +0000 UTC]

The meaning of this poem definitely apply to some people I know.

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WordOfChen In reply to JackalyenMystique [2017-07-06 05:09:50 +0000 UTC]

Yeah...forgiving is easy, the forgetting is the hard part I reckon.

Anyway thanks for enjoying my work

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JackalyenMystique In reply to WordOfChen [2017-07-06 05:27:35 +0000 UTC]

Yeah. Especially when people repeat the habits of their bad attitudes.

And you're welcome.

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WordOfChen In reply to JackalyenMystique [2017-07-06 05:28:24 +0000 UTC]

Nothing we can do about that. People have to want to change from within. Right now I know I'm struggling with some issues myself but I try to keep positive and just look forward to things

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JackalyenMystique In reply to WordOfChen [2017-07-06 13:25:30 +0000 UTC]

I can understand that. Still, you would think people who hold themselves in such high regard would know better.

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WordOfChen In reply to JackalyenMystique [2017-07-06 13:38:32 +0000 UTC]

Double standards tend to be what humans are about. Even for the best of us.

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JackalyenMystique In reply to WordOfChen [2017-07-08 06:06:21 +0000 UTC]

That's true.

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ValentineStein [2017-07-05 00:01:08 +0000 UTC]

NOIIIIIICE I enjoyed reading this!!! Ah it's like hearing a characters thoughts!!

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WordOfChen In reply to ValentineStein [2017-07-05 00:15:13 +0000 UTC]

The reading for it, will lend a nice voice as well. Thank you for enjoying my work

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Yorumikuto [2017-07-04 22:23:28 +0000 UTC]

Ahh reading this... Its just perfect, great job <3

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WordOfChen In reply to Yorumikuto [2017-07-04 23:17:14 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for enjoying my work ^^

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kdpxva [2017-07-04 21:42:17 +0000 UTC]

Very good.

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WordOfChen In reply to kdpxva [2017-07-04 23:17:29 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for enjoying my work ^^

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kdpxva In reply to WordOfChen [2017-07-04 23:21:45 +0000 UTC]

I always do!

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Pibee [2017-07-04 15:24:59 +0000 UTC]

Another beautiful piece! Keep up the amazing work!!!! โ™กโ™ฅโ™กโ™ฅ

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WordOfChen In reply to Pibee [2017-07-04 15:43:00 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for enjoying my work my friend ^^

- Chennie

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