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Published: 2015-10-19 10:49:09 +0000 UTC; Views: 2810; Favourites: 38; Downloads: 13
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Greetings of Peace and Joy!This is the updated version of the recruitment poster for the United Nations Equestrian Expeditionary Forces!
UNEEF For short.
We are currently working on a new story, and we would like you to be part of this massive endeavor! Fame and Glory awaits those who sign up.
Our official group sponsors are:
and
We are looking for soldiers who are capable of taking the fight back to the enemy and bringing about a new era of peace and prosperity.
For more details, do not hesitate to contact the groups listed above or
This poster was made in collaboration with
This would not be possible with the amazing skills of this individual.
^^ You guys would also like to check out the Coordinate Fire Flash Vid:
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Also, special thanks goes to
as well as Napalmer from the World of Tanks SEA Server
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Comments: 134
Oh no, let's just say it is an outside faction 
Well, the UN name have kinda grown on me, considering it has such a powerful meaning into it. Perhaps, I would place more advertisements to actually give my UN more depth and it's own character separate from what we have in the real world.
And well, this faction is outside of Equestria and they've dealt with their own problems. And these superweapons are another thing which gives the UN it's militaristic attitude. It kinda says something about the UN already.
Oh no, again, I did mention countless times the UN has it's shortcomings and there is another more dangerous faction on the rise within the story. It would all be clarified and justified when the story is developed and would also be further developed as it goes on.
And yes, those have been taken into consideration. ^^ And we kinda have our own ways of tackling them head-on.
Would you be interested in assisting to make this story possible... do not hesitate to contact any of the groups mentioned above. xD
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Alright, just wanted to give you some things to consider.
Thanks for the offer,but I'm not interested in helping with the story. I prefer to keep my stories a lot more in line with canon Equestria, which means I tend to stick to a pure high fantasy version of Equestria rather than one that crosses over with modern military / sci-fi. I just figured since I was already talking to you, I'd offer a few suggestions.
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Well, not sure if you were giving tips or trying to bring down the story before it even got started. And why comment on this if you have no interest in it whatsoever... o.OIf you dislike these sort of stories, then just kindly tolerate them.
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The tips about considering renaming the organization and such so that people don't get the wrong impression before even starting the story (assuming it's the UN from our world) were just that: tips. So was the tip about being careful to avoid creating a Mary Sue organization that has super advanced magic, super advanced technology, and so on.
Why comment at all? Well, to start with, saying that I'm not interested in helping with it is a polite way of saying I don't approve of it, and I don't like the idea. But I didn't see any reason to be that blunt about it. As far as why I give tips anyway? First, cause as a professional writer (yes, writing is my real job), I try to offer tips when I can to help people write better and avoid common mistakes that writers often make.
And second, because I'm tired of seeing how badly so many people have corrupted this fandom by taking a show about friendship and harmony, and turning it into a franchise of war, violence, and so on, while completely losing sight of the themes, messages, and lessons of the show. And like I said, it was perfectly reasonable to assume based on the promo images, that you were writing "Yet another human military fighting wars in Equestria" story.
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Well, as stated, those have already been taken into consideration and ads, such as this one are being worked on to help build a better picture of the UN within the story.
Well, you don't approve of the idea, it would be sort of better if you just left it alone and allowed the other people to practice their creativity, for technically, our target audience are people who would be able to appreciate a good story and not those who disapprove of said story. We did not force you to comment or anything, but you did it of your own accord, and judging by your first comment, we could tell your reaction to this upcoming comic/fanfic is not a good one.
Well, then just leave these stories alone if you do not approve of them. If you dislike the story, there is no point trying to bring them down and frustrating yourself over them. And, like I said, we are striving to be unique in a sense. This is not just a mere story being developed for the sake of war, that would be a pretty much a cliche' theme already. This one combines multiple elements which we are trying to merge to create a good story. And I did state, that despite this story being formulated 2 years ago, a lot of the proposed scenes are already appearing within the actual show itself in the current season.
Just because you blew out the flame of somebody else' candle, does not make yours shine brighter. If you truly do not like this story, then kindly leave it alone. When I asked you if you are interested, I meant that in a way that if you want to further criticize the story and give truly helpful tips to it, then I am open to suggestions, that is if you've heard a good enough portion of it. Right now, I do not think you're in a good position to actually give any feedback or criticisms for you barely know anything about what would actually transpire in the story. You simply judged it through one image, which is not really a good way to do so.
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When I made the suggestions, I had no way of knowing you'd already considered them. But again, people who can't deal with the fact that some people aren't going to like their writing or art, and they might say they don't like it, probably shouldn't be writing or creating art.
Also, I didn't blow out the flame of anyone's candle. If someone telling you they don't like a story idea, or don't think the idea is plausible, is enough to blow out the candle, then again, you probably shouldn't be writing. Because although certainly, some people are going to tell you they like the story, there are also a lot of people who are going to tell you they don't like it. That's just something you are going to have to get used to.
As far as giving truly helpful tips, well I still argue that the tip about changing the name of the organization to one that doesn't exist in the real world is a truly helpful tip. Keep in mind that there are almost 100,000 stories on FimFiction. Every single day, on average, 50 new stories are added. That means your cover art, and the first sentence of your story summary are about all you have to grab the reader's attention. Of course, you are completely free to ignore that tip. It's your story. But it was still a useful tip.
Also, I didn't judge it based on one image. I judged it based on several similar images you've added to groups over the last few days. All of them basically gave the same impression: That this was yet another human military in Equestria story. After all, it wouldn't be the first story to send the UN to Equestria, or send tanks to Equestria, in some cases to protect Equestrian cities, and in other cases, to attack those cities. The impression I got based on the art is a completely reasonable impression--especially given the kind of stuff that usually shows up on the MLP fan fiction sites. (I'll also point out that others I showed the art to got pretty much the same impression I did.) So again, I think the tip about reconsidering the use of the UN logo, UN name, and so on, is a perfectly reasonable suggestion if you don't want people to immediately get the wrong idea about your story. Once again, with 100,000 stories on FimFiction, and 50 new ones being added every day, you get a very small amount of a reader's time to try to distinguish yours as being something unique. And the current art and such you are using simply doesn't do that.
So ultimately, if I were you, I'd reconsider how you are promoting the story, because there's nothing unique at all about the art you are currently using to do it.
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Well, we expected some people to hate on this story, however, we do not appreciate the sort of people who try to bring the said story down without even having valid knowledge about it.
Well, you said that you dislike the theme of this story and proceeded to instill negativity upon it without even knowing what this story even holds. So there is absolutely no reason for you to spark negativity over something you are completely clueless about. As proven, you know so little about this story to already give criticisms over it. So, you basically made all your assumptions by looking at a small amount of images, or even image, as well as a GIF we presented. The other images were not really uploaded to that many groups, so we were not going through great lengths to make them ads. This one on the other hand is our first real advertisement, then the GIF which we also have held back to an extent. We have not submitted the GIF to that many groups, as compared to this one. (So on tally; we have one failed Advertisement, then Two supplementary images, One Real Advertisement, and 1 GIF which serves to complement the real advertisement.)
The name of the organization is striking as it is, and we plan to have more ads up to give better character to what this organization holds and how it differs from the one in real life while still sharing similarities to it.
Well, the story is still developing and more content are coming. This story would not simply be limited to a fanfiction, but we are also planning to have it adopted as a comic series. Lots of developments and planning are currently going on, and we are not yet ready to release it any time soon. And the current art, but that does not say anything about the future artworks we plan to put up. Our focus is not simply just on fanfictions, but beyond that. And I am guessing you all missed the little pony icon by the UN logo, that kinda already says the kind of race which would comprise the UN. How they would not be human, but stick more closely to Canon Equestria.
The name of the faction has already been taken into close consideration by me and the other group admins of the sponsor groups mentioned above, and I do not think we would change it any time soon unless we feel the true need to do so. We simply plan to put more content up and let it develop from there. And considering we're not only using simple posters to promote this, but also Animated GIFs as well group sponsorships, I think we have a very unique way of promoting our story.
Like I said, if you're interested to give more criticisms or contribute to actually make the story better, then we are open to it, we have a Skype group set-up for that reason. And we are always open for improvements, as long as they are truly valid improvements wherein the individual is actually familiar with the story and not just making assumptions to what it contains.
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We are open to truly good criticisms, both positive and negative. Hence why I tried to explain it to you as best I could in a respectful manner. However, we are not grateful nor do we appreciate, criticisms which are out of place, considering the one who made the critique is clueless or naive to what the story truly holds. Like what you did. Despite countless explanations, you still refuse to acknowledge the facts regarding the story and continue to strive to bring it down before it even starts.
Again, this is the first advertisement among many. I could not count the number of times I have said that to you. More ads would still come, but this one is in place to simply gather support for this endeavor. Hence, "Be Part of the UN Forces" title. It is meant to gather up artists and writers to help support the story.
Unfortunately, I do not think you would understand that. You basically wasted your time and that of those who are making the story with your out of place and somewhat naive criticisms. We tried to explain it to you, but you refuse to listen. As evident, I did respond properly to your suggestions, and they have been taken into consideration, but did you actually pay attention to the explanations, cause it seems like you didn't.
And again, this is an advertisement made from scratch. This advertisement is in place to find people who are willing to contribute to the story, and we have indeed found some. We have next to no resources for this story, and yet we are doing anything and everything we could to make it possible. Hence why we do not appreciate people who bring it down for such vague reasons such as simply not liking the theme of the story.
If you have actually given good criticisms wherein you actually know what you are saying regarding the story, then we would be grateful for it. But as evident, you are quick to pass judgement on this story when you have so little to go on to make such vast assumptions and criticisms over it. You seem to love nitpicking everything and I truly hope karma hits it mark on you. I do not think you would also appreciate it if someone criticized your works before they even started or before they even read what you have in store, making wild assumptions on the cover image of said story to make their entire judgement on it.
And again, this is the first of many and this is just to merely gather support for this story. It is related to the story, but it is simply the opening act to a much bigger show. I would also like to add, how could you say a story won't be able to touch the sky if you keep it caged up and never give it a chance to fly...
Anyways, show some respect for other writers and artists, considering you are one. If you could not tolerate stories with these sort of themes, or if you could not respect the people behind said stories, then kindly stay away from them if you do not have any real interest in them instead of making out of place criticisms just because you dislike the theme of the story. A true critique is made by someone who actually knows what he/she is saying, and knows what he/she is talking about, so I do not see you as worthy of making such critique over this story for you are naive to it. So stop wasting your time and more importantly, the time of others, on things you have no interest in whatsoever. You basically just commented just to bring down a story whose theme you dislike.
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Well, we are Open to GOOD suggestions and not bad ones, such as yours. As a matter of fact, I've had a long discussion with a more reasonable and not to mention, more logical person regarding the clear flaws within the story plot and design. And no, you attacked this deviation first with your very first comment with being completely naive on what this story truly holds. You simply let your hatred of modern technology in a MLP verse get the better of you and you simply attacked this promotional ad because of that.
Simply by looking at your profile and I could easily tell you dislike stories with this sort of theme, and not to mention you also said that yourself. You assumed that we would be among the other artists which fell short of your expectations, cause maybe you expected the story be about something you like and stick more to fantasy.
And now, you blame other people for what they have done to you and your stories, and you're doing those exact same things to this deviation right now. This deviation was meant to only get the first hints of the story, an to gather support in the forms of artists and story developers. You're judging an entire story while being completely naive to it. Which is not really that smart nor professional. And this story is far from ready to be released into the general public, it's still in the conceptual and developmental stages. We've still got a long way to go before we finally bring this story out, or if we could even bring it out in the first place.
And there is also no reason to be polite to people such as you. You've clearly shown incredibly biased judgement and made naive impressions regarding something you know nothing about. And it was made from scratch, in the Skype group, we defined it as something we did on our own without having to commission it from someone else. Most of what we are doing is completely non-profit, which might change as we further expand and gather more artists to help make the promotions for us. What we lack in funding and artistic skills, we strive to make up for with sheer determination and hard work, and the drive to bring out a good story for everyone to see.
You made incredible criticisms of the story without knowing what it held, you also disliked the theme and disapproved of it from the start, commenting negativity on something you have absolutely no interest in whatsoever. You made a lot of your judgement because of the theme, which you hate. So, it's more of a personal judgement than a professional one. If you were a professional, then you would gather more information regarding something to make an accurate and factual judgement of it.
And as far as professionalism, I do not see it from you. You went out of your way to comment negativity on something you completely dislike, and you also said this was a waste of your time, when you fail to see that you waste the time of others as well. And yet, here you are trying to find every loophole you could to try to make a comeback. And your incredibly long comment chain is clearly visible in the front of the deviation, clearly indicating your main objective right now is to bring this story down by giving it a bad name without even giving it a chance to shine. Your biased judgement over something you do not know is very unprofessional, and yes, I've talked to other people regarding this and they've shown better demeanor and actually showed professionalism.
And like I said so many times before, if you're not interested, and if you could not respect other writers and artists about their ideas, then kindly stay away from them or tolerate them. This story is not for you, and all you're doing is trying to bring it down with your naive impressions and out of place comments. This is simply a recruitment poster, nothing you should get irked up about. So, if you would so kindly leave, then that would be for the best of all. People like you are really not welcome for this is simply not your place. Unless you could change your views, and conduct yourself in an actual professional way then we would could actually have a more decent conversation. If you have any concerns, then shoot those groups above a PM so we could all better discuss these issues.
I would also like to point out, this is targeted for those interested in bringing out a story. We would rather be talking to those people than the ones who want to shoot it down for something as petty as the first promotional ad. You've always associated us with other artists and writers without even fully accepting the notion that we are not them. You're basing a lot of your arguments on the other stories which has a modern theme into them, and how they fell short of your expectations, most likely without even thinking about how these stories were not truly meant nor addressed to you for you dislike their very concepts in the first place. Naturally, if someone dislikes a story, then of course that person would pass a negative judgement on said story, however, why would that person even read a story if he/she dislike the theme or the very essence of it in the first place.... As stated, maybe these stories were not meant for you because of that and other people who actually like the theme would find a better appreciation for the story than you. It's all subjective and a matter of perspective and personal interests.
So if you truly have NO interest in this story whatsoever, then kindly steer clear of it and have respect for other writers and artists such as yourself. If by some miracle, you've had a change of heart, then just simply shoot the groups a PM as stated before and let's continue from there. You claim to be professional, then prove it, or better yet, show it. Good day to you.
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I am interested, and by refusing to listen to me and continuing to actually comment on this, you're showing how incredibly hypocritical and unprofessional you are.
Not really, you've clearly shown you're not. You continue to comment and argue your stance despite stating that you are not interested and done wasting your time on this. You continue to carry on this pointless argument and that is already proof of how unprofessional you are.
By merely commenting and bashing something simply because it is not to your liking, is a clear sign you don't have any good intentions whatsoever. And this is a mere ad to help spread the word that we are searching for artists while giving a very faint idea of what is to be expected from the story.
That person was clearly misguided, accusing me of submitting to the wrong group when that group had a folder that contradicts his/her statements. I even linked him/her the folder of said group, if you did not truly pay attention to my response. He did it twice, the first time, I tried to explain to that person in a polite way, but he/she proceeded to comment again on the matter, so of course, the response I made was in order. Once again, you fail to see the facts presented to you. I am open to criticism, but good ones with validity and not completely foolish ones.
And you've been saying that countless times. And yet, you still come back to try to carry on this pointless argument which you started because of your hatred for modern themed stories. We already told you to stay away from these stories, and yet you still come back to strive to bring them down.
Don't come to other stories and bash them merely for their theme, which you clearly did in your argument, stating that this fandom is ruined by writers such as those. Think for a moment, and maybe it is people such as you who bring this fandom down. Instead of Love and Tolerate, you choose to bash and insult.
Think about it, maybe you're the waste of time here, for this is not your deviation to begin with. You're simply just coming back despite you saying you're done, which is very hypocritical and idiotic.
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I'm not sure why you are even bothering to respond with these long rants, since as I already told you, I'm not reading them anymore since it's abundantly clear that talking to you is a complete waste of time. You may as well stop wasting your time as well.
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Moonrise If you dislike what WorldofTanks has to say don't bother saying anything back. Cause right now he is having the more logical reasoning then what you have to reply about.
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Well, then stop replying or commenting on this deviation without thinking of what you are doing or saying, for this is not even yours to begin with. It's a very dumb thing to do.
You still keep replying despite you saying it's a waste of time for you, and despite me repeatedly telling to you to leave deviations which you do not truly like alone, you still keep coming back and that clearly says a lot about you. So do yourself and everybody else a favor and bugger off if you no longer know what you are doing or even saying.
You claim to be professional, yet you've proven that you're not. So kindly bugger off from this deviation, for this is not your place nor interest to begin with.
You also look for whatever it is you could nitpick from the deviation, you're not a professional critic to be able to do that. Especially with what you've displayed in this entire argument.
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You can hide my comment but thats the truth
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Well, and that group also has a folder which does not necessarily need to be related to GUP. Here is a link to said folder:
panzer-vor.deviantart.com/gall…
As you can see, "Tank Art, NOT Anime related." The deviations within that folder is nor related to GUP whatsoever. In-game screenshots, and wallpapers.
So, try to read that folder before passing on judgement. You keep commenting on this deviation, so I am guessing all you're trying to do is to bring this project down before it even starts.
Also, this deviation is no longer in that group, so you're complaint is no longer valid. And, this message would have been better sent via the Private Messaging System. Hopefully, you could read and not just comment foolishly on something. Have nice day.
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Well, this is for an upcoming story being developed by the groups mentioned. We are currently in search for capable artists who are interested in making this project, a reality.
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Well, about multiple factions in Equestria.
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That would be amazing ^^ How do you plan to assist?
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I dont know yet, on both questions, it depends on what ya need
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Well, artists... lots and lots of artists... possible storyboard developers and Writers.
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Well, then you are more than welcome to join in. ^^ This is also an opportunity for you to enhance your abilities to draw through practice and such xD
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Okay, just send me a PM if you're still interested and we'll continue from there
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Yay! 
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Best of luck for you and for your comrades, pare!
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Thank you so much ^^ We're truly going to need it Dx
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will u guys be doing clan wars?
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Well, FLUKE have been doing Clan Wars before, we would be happy to do those again.
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