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x0xVampirex0x — i'm done.
Published: 2011-01-16 18:48:29 +0000 UTC; Views: 469; Favourites: 17; Downloads: 0
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Description I remember everything.
The pain I did to you.
The pain I caused to myself.
Those three words you'd say before you get off the phone.
"I Love You."
Now its all gone.
I say them first so I know you will.
Its just dust.
Its me fighting for you.
Its me caring.
Why bother?
When in the end what I want wont happen.
Why try?
When I know i'm going to give up.
And when I don't you do.
I wish it was the same.
I wish things were right again.
Now, i'm the one who is fighting for something that wont happen.
I love you.
Please don't bother.
I minus well give up.
I'm done fighting.
<|3
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Comments: 44

AKsroa4a [2011-01-18 05:23:18 +0000 UTC]

Just wondering, does it say "minus well" instead of "might as well" on purpose?

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x0xVampirex0x In reply to AKsroa4a [2011-01-18 16:40:24 +0000 UTC]

lol. i wasnt in any mood when i wrote it. i can change it. im just to lazy.

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AKsroa4a In reply to x0xVampirex0x [2011-01-18 20:36:45 +0000 UTC]

Ah. Okay then.

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wickedimpulse [2011-01-17 15:58:28 +0000 UTC]

Wow! This is a poignant and true poem. I loike it a lot though it needs some work like using more poetic techniques to convey your feelings ... unless you liek it like that. ^_^

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x0xVampirex0x In reply to wickedimpulse [2011-01-17 21:59:20 +0000 UTC]

eh. i write like the way i want. i write more stories. so it soesnt matter to me.

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wickedimpulse In reply to x0xVampirex0x [2011-01-17 22:38:45 +0000 UTC]

Cool. XD

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MoSacLuvsBlueOct [2011-01-17 09:20:12 +0000 UTC]

This poem describes exactly how I am with my gf right now....

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x0xVampirex0x In reply to MoSacLuvsBlueOct [2011-01-17 21:59:34 +0000 UTC]

awe

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MoSacLuvsBlueOct In reply to x0xVampirex0x [2011-01-18 00:31:39 +0000 UTC]

It's okay..

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hermafrodite [2011-01-16 21:27:39 +0000 UTC]

im so rite ther wiating for that goddess i dream of

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x0xVampirex0x In reply to hermafrodite [2011-01-16 21:39:11 +0000 UTC]

and whose that?

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hermafrodite In reply to x0xVampirex0x [2011-01-16 22:06:03 +0000 UTC]

her name in morgen breeze ever hear of her?

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x0xVampirex0x In reply to hermafrodite [2011-01-16 22:08:39 +0000 UTC]

i dont think soo

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hermafrodite In reply to x0xVampirex0x [2011-01-16 23:45:11 +0000 UTC]

i still love her but shit ive ben waiting my turn all year i just hope its worth it win it happens if at all

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x0xVampirex0x In reply to hermafrodite [2011-01-16 23:47:02 +0000 UTC]

awe. hopefully it will

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hermafrodite In reply to x0xVampirex0x [2011-01-16 23:49:59 +0000 UTC]

i want her so much>-<

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x0xVampirex0x In reply to hermafrodite [2011-01-16 23:59:23 +0000 UTC]

tell her?

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hermafrodite In reply to x0xVampirex0x [2011-01-17 00:04:31 +0000 UTC]

yes mutipul times i give her valitine on v bay rather she whants it are not

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x0xVampirex0x In reply to hermafrodite [2011-01-17 00:08:03 +0000 UTC]

have you talked it out with her?

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hermafrodite In reply to x0xVampirex0x [2011-02-18 03:37:33 +0000 UTC]

yes she seems to have opened her mind this my be my shot im just scared to take it

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x0xVampirex0x In reply to hermafrodite [2011-02-18 20:10:05 +0000 UTC]

dont be. tell her straight forward you really never know =]

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hermafrodite In reply to x0xVampirex0x [2011-02-19 18:36:30 +0000 UTC]

heh ja OK my mom was supposedly 100% incapable of havening a kid but hear i am i feel lucky today

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x0xVampirex0x In reply to hermafrodite [2011-02-20 02:38:14 +0000 UTC]

good.

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hermafrodite In reply to x0xVampirex0x [2011-02-20 02:48:18 +0000 UTC]

i am so Bord

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x0xVampirex0x In reply to hermafrodite [2011-02-20 03:41:17 +0000 UTC]

that sucks

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hermafrodite In reply to x0xVampirex0x [2011-02-21 02:42:48 +0000 UTC]

har har

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Psykan [2011-01-16 19:27:46 +0000 UTC]

I really hope things get better for you. But, don't give up hope. Remember...

As long as you are alive, there is always a possibility.

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x0xVampirex0x In reply to Psykan [2011-01-16 19:36:27 +0000 UTC]

<3 thanks

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Psykan In reply to x0xVampirex0x [2011-01-16 19:40:25 +0000 UTC]

You're most welcome!

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x0xVampirex0x In reply to Psykan [2011-01-16 19:54:01 +0000 UTC]

=]

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Psykan In reply to x0xVampirex0x [2011-01-16 20:02:50 +0000 UTC]

Good luck.

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x0xVampirex0x In reply to Psykan [2011-01-16 20:32:44 +0000 UTC]

ty

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SocraticPrince [2011-01-16 18:54:48 +0000 UTC]

I'm sorry. It'll get better.

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x0xVampirex0x In reply to SocraticPrince [2011-01-16 19:02:18 +0000 UTC]

=[ i hope so.

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SocraticPrince In reply to x0xVampirex0x [2011-01-16 19:07:19 +0000 UTC]

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x0xVampirex0x In reply to SocraticPrince [2011-01-16 19:15:26 +0000 UTC]

*hugs*

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SocraticPrince In reply to x0xVampirex0x [2011-01-16 19:23:28 +0000 UTC]

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x0xVampirex0x In reply to SocraticPrince [2011-01-16 19:36:32 +0000 UTC]

=]

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Mourning-Star98 [2011-01-16 18:50:28 +0000 UTC]

Im sorry. Things will get better I promise.

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x0xVampirex0x In reply to Mourning-Star98 [2011-01-16 18:53:33 +0000 UTC]

=[ i hope so. i have to see her in april. <|3

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Mourning-Star98 In reply to x0xVampirex0x [2011-01-16 19:43:53 +0000 UTC]

Well Aprils far away lots of things can happen between now and then

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x0xVampirex0x In reply to Mourning-Star98 [2011-01-16 19:53:56 +0000 UTC]

yeah. but she said no. soo. idkk

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Mourning-Star98 In reply to x0xVampirex0x [2011-01-16 20:27:42 +0000 UTC]

Just give it time

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x0xVampirex0x In reply to Mourning-Star98 [2011-01-16 20:32:35 +0000 UTC]

mhm

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