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Published: 2011-01-16 18:48:29 +0000 UTC; Views: 469; Favourites: 17; Downloads: 0
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I remember everything.The pain I did to you.
The pain I caused to myself.
Those three words you'd say before you get off the phone.
"I Love You."
Now its all gone.
I say them first so I know you will.
Its just dust.
Its me fighting for you.
Its me caring.
Why bother?
When in the end what I want wont happen.
Why try?
When I know i'm going to give up.
And when I don't you do.
I wish it was the same.
I wish things were right again.
Now, i'm the one who is fighting for something that wont happen.
I love you.
Please don't bother.
I minus well give up.
I'm done fighting.
<|3
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Comments: 44
AKsroa4a [2011-01-18 05:23:18 +0000 UTC]
Just wondering, does it say "minus well" instead of "might as well" on purpose?
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x0xVampirex0x In reply to AKsroa4a [2011-01-18 16:40:24 +0000 UTC]
lol. i wasnt in any mood when i wrote it. i can change it. im just to lazy.
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wickedimpulse [2011-01-17 15:58:28 +0000 UTC]
Wow! This is a poignant and true poem. I loike it a lot though it needs some work like using more poetic techniques to convey your feelings ... unless you liek it like that. ^_^
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x0xVampirex0x In reply to wickedimpulse [2011-01-17 21:59:20 +0000 UTC]
eh. i write like the way i want. i write more stories. so it soesnt matter to me.
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MoSacLuvsBlueOct [2011-01-17 09:20:12 +0000 UTC]
This poem describes exactly how I am with my gf right now....
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hermafrodite [2011-01-16 21:27:39 +0000 UTC]
im so rite ther wiating for that goddess i dream of
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hermafrodite In reply to x0xVampirex0x [2011-01-16 22:06:03 +0000 UTC]
her name in morgen breeze ever hear of her?
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hermafrodite In reply to x0xVampirex0x [2011-01-16 23:45:11 +0000 UTC]
i still love her but shit ive ben waiting my turn all year i just hope its worth it win it happens if at all
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x0xVampirex0x In reply to hermafrodite [2011-01-16 23:47:02 +0000 UTC]
awe. hopefully it will
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hermafrodite In reply to x0xVampirex0x [2011-01-16 23:49:59 +0000 UTC]
i want her so much>-<
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hermafrodite In reply to x0xVampirex0x [2011-01-17 00:04:31 +0000 UTC]
yes mutipul times i give her valitine on v bay rather she whants it are not
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x0xVampirex0x In reply to hermafrodite [2011-01-17 00:08:03 +0000 UTC]
have you talked it out with her?
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hermafrodite In reply to x0xVampirex0x [2011-02-18 03:37:33 +0000 UTC]
yes she seems to have opened her mind this my be my shot im just scared to take it
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x0xVampirex0x In reply to hermafrodite [2011-02-18 20:10:05 +0000 UTC]
dont be. tell her straight forward you really never know =]
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hermafrodite In reply to x0xVampirex0x [2011-02-19 18:36:30 +0000 UTC]
heh ja OK my mom was supposedly 100% incapable of havening a kid but hear i am i feel lucky today
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Psykan [2011-01-16 19:27:46 +0000 UTC]
I really hope things get better for you. But, don't give up hope. Remember...
As long as you are alive, there is always a possibility.
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x0xVampirex0x In reply to Mourning-Star98 [2011-01-16 18:53:33 +0000 UTC]
=[ i hope so. i have to see her in april. <|3
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Mourning-Star98 In reply to x0xVampirex0x [2011-01-16 19:43:53 +0000 UTC]
Well Aprils far away lots of things can happen between now and then
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x0xVampirex0x In reply to Mourning-Star98 [2011-01-16 19:53:56 +0000 UTC]
yeah. but she said no. soo. idkk
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