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Black & white Faber Castell Polychromos!Related content
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Fantastic muscle tone in the model and bravo for bringing it out!
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Agreed with BenBrookDover, and I would add the right shoulder, wich is in disproportion with the strong broad back. But the work on highlights and shadows is truly amazing and your gentle strokes of the pen are eyecatching. Nice pose too, overall very good drawing. But there is one thing that bothers me even more than the faults of anatomy - is the unfinished hair. Especially there where it covers the soulder. It cuts of the flesh far too harshly and she looks like having no shoulder at all and it ruins the composition. Just finish the hair and it will be perfect!
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You're right, thank you. It seemed to me not important to finish the hair because
originally i only want to test my new white pencils and nice highlights
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Iยดm glad my comment was helpfull 
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Head, left feet and hands are a little bit too small.
Well done with the highlights and the shadows!
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