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Published: 2006-05-19 00:13:22 +0000 UTC; Views: 125; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 11
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I finally make a DA account and I don't submit anything for two months <_<This is an original character, but he doesn't have a name yet
Anyway, I'm going to colour it soon, but please tell me if there's anything I can fix or improve
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Comments: 8
fayrenpickpocket [2006-05-29 16:13:01 +0000 UTC]
Wow...This is amazing. As much as I anticipate the coloured version - I'm in love with the lineart as well. His nose is to die for.
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xxperplexity In reply to fayrenpickpocket [2006-05-30 00:48:56 +0000 UTC]
Thank you for such a nice comment I'm actually trying to colour it right now, but I haven't done a lot of colouring on photoshop so hopefully it will turn out
P.S.- I'm glad you like the nose
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SSJVash [2006-05-19 04:54:12 +0000 UTC]
I think it's really neat! He looks a lot like my one friend. And I also agree with the scarf thing, but I must say it's a nice looking scarf. ^^
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xxperplexity In reply to SSJVash [2006-05-19 14:47:31 +0000 UTC]
lol thanks
I will soon fix the ironed scarf XD
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pedroflip [2006-05-19 00:29:22 +0000 UTC]
yeah looks very good in general the face and shape are great! now, just maybe you should get busy on the clothing details, and the wings, like you said, making it less sketchy...
and btw the scarf is a little strange, maybe the hanging part should be over the shoulder, or just don't make it hang so straight next to the body (looks a little like it's been ironed )
good work!
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xxperplexity In reply to pedroflip [2006-05-19 00:46:58 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much for your comment
I'm totally going to try to finish it and put in more detail, I think I need to fix the folds in the jacket, some of them look kind of awkward lol
Yeah I'm definatly going to change the scarf, I was thinking there was something off about it, looks like the wind is just carrying the scarf and nothing else But it's nice to get it from someone elses perspective
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