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Published: 2009-08-21 17:36:05 +0000 UTC; Views: 362; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 6
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Much has passed us,With one flowing breeze,
All our thoughts collide
As we set aside the present,
We put ahead the past near the future,
All happening and thinking at once,
Repeating over and over again,
For all eternity
Until death of that memory.
Where am I at right now?
You ask;
Am I present, future, or past right now?
You wonder,
Yet to find the answer
You must awaken,
But how?
This is crazy!
I'm not asleep...
Am I?
I know that's me in the past,
But is that me in the future?
If the future is happening right now,
as we speak,
As the past is repeating,
As the present is coming,
Then.....
........................................
The present becomes the past,
The future becomes the present,
The past is just there;
We're in the present right now,
So..does that mean...
Those memories are lost?
Those future memories are lost
Just up until they are found
If they ever are.
Many paths exist,
Many paths never happen
So therefore,
They are never found.
Comments: 22
Lovely, beautiful and a wonderful concept.
And might I add-- Good luck!
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Thanks^^ The contest ends tomorrow and the voting starts after DX
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kinda, not so much, lot of other junk on my mind hehe but in other words, i suppose i kind of am o.o XD
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Didn't notice it until you thought about it, eh?
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not really haha im so bored x.x
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*It's good to say
That comment would have been more profound without the typo
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Either way, I knew what ya meant :3
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It's to say you've worked with a complex concept. Time is one of those things that just IS chaotic and constantly in flux. You've shown this explicitely and the fluency of the poetry itself is also quite chaotic but in a good way as that reflects the nature of time
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...I love you too, Kumori 
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What an excellent response that was
You couldn't have chosen a more perfect time to look at time as inspiration in this case
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mhm *nodnod* I wrote more last night one main one cuz of you haha that one..one..that i typed...cant remember the name haha
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Well dont look at me because I don't know what it's called either
You mean to say that I inspired you...??
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That's so sweet
I'm glad I could be of some indirect influence on a piece of yours
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XD Well ya are different from most of friend, talkin' online ones too who are...don't tell them I said...*sniffles*old XD not that old though XDDD
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xDDD Dont worry, my lips are sealed
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okay ya don't even know them anyhow so hehe XDDD
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xdD All the more reason NOT to worry
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