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Published: 2011-03-28 14:50:37 +0000 UTC; Views: 811; Favourites: 23; Downloads: 15
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It might not be normal for octopus to eat bees, but he's a psychic octopus so I think it's okay for him to eat whatever he wants. c:Oh, and Mira is running around like her typical self.
~Lady Mirage and Mr. Heptapus
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Comments: 7
Hello!
First off, I really like this picture! It's so cute :3
Ok, here's my critique~
Vision
It caught my eye! And I'm one of the people, who tend to overlook a lot of pictures xD Though I almost didn't see the bee OTL
The lines and everything are so round and bubbly which give an overall corporate look :3
The colors work pretty well together! And the texture looks good too, it gives the impression of a children's book illustration - very nice! I like the small details you added compared to the bold outlines. I only have a little problem with the bubbles and fine line of the bee [flying]. It's kinda hard to see >.<
Originality
Not to mention having an octopus eating a bee it's very original! The character designs are really nice and original. At least I haven't seen lots of works like that ^_^
As already mentioned, the details add a lot of value to the drawing and storytelling (for instance, I really like the octo's bandage xD). Besides that, you have a very nice and refreshing art style.
Technique
The lines and coloring are very clean and solid. Also, you picked good colors, they work well together and are beautiful as individual colors too! xD
I only gave 4 stars, because the overall technique level isn't as high as a 5-star level: the coloring and shading are very good, but not too complex or hard to master . But I guess, that is because, this technique just fits the style, so it's still very good!
Since it's a "deformed" style (kinda like chibis) I can't really say anything about anatomy xD
Impact
It makes a very good impact to me. Looking at this drawing makes me feel happier :3
And it's so damn cute! xD
Also, as already mentioned, very nice color combination and texture. It's very nice to look at.
I hope you think this critique was fair and please don't be mad at me, if I should have said something "mean". I hope you understood everything I wanted to say (can't blame you if my english is confusing lol).
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Is it weird that the very first thing I did see WAS the bee, and it's just so puny? ;;
The octopus makes me happy ~ That loofy expression ~
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But that's why they have noses too! c:
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I love how tiny and chubby she looks~ and mr heptapus is sooo adorable. I love how round his tentacles are.
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Thanks for the link back to see how you used my Stock. Job well done.
Smoko-Stock
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