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don't fade away!eat vitamins
walk in the sun
make the time
to take the time
to breathe
and be
the beauty
that surrounds you
recapture your spark!
eat with your hands and
talk to strangers
from the proper angle
every face looks like
an angel's
each moment
bears the makings
of a miracle
have a little faith!
throw caution to the wind
leap without looking
life would lack for love
without a little
falling
find the future
full of feeling
at your fingertips
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Comments: 121
YouInventedMe In reply to ??? [2018-10-29 17:10:23 +0000 UTC]
Thank you. You may see a strange influx of severely late replies from me,
because I am sort of here again.
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rhunel In reply to YouInventedMe [2018-10-29 23:58:58 +0000 UTC]
That is cool. Welcome sorta back!
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mermaidmusic [2009-02-11 05:25:04 +0000 UTC]
I'm going to memorize this to tell myself every day. I love how you're able to write about such positive things, it makes me happy.
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YouInventedMe In reply to mermaidmusic [2009-02-11 08:55:36 +0000 UTC]
thanks
my writing is as varied as my moods.
haha.
xo!
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YouInventedMe In reply to mirror-to-the-world [2009-02-04 23:21:06 +0000 UTC]
thanks, man. good to hear from you.
xo!
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Ennuiiunne [2009-01-30 00:57:21 +0000 UTC]
Much like this one over mine. Much more bright and cheery. I really enjoy the way its written. Printing it out to remind myself. Thanks
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Blue-Eyed-Snidget [2009-01-28 02:09:12 +0000 UTC]
Added this to my favs to remind me Very good work. Inspiring
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YouInventedMe In reply to Blue-Eyed-Snidget [2009-01-28 02:24:03 +0000 UTC]
thanks a lot
xo!
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GetYourGrip [2009-01-26 18:42:26 +0000 UTC]
I thought this seemed different before I saw that it was a collab. And it is one of your best collabs, I'd say
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Maybe-On-Sunday [2009-01-25 17:06:35 +0000 UTC]
life would lack for love
without a little
falling
find the future
full of feeling
at your fingertips
You're such a great writer
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YouInventedMe In reply to Maybe-On-Sunday [2009-01-26 06:51:21 +0000 UTC]
thank you very much
xo!
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eightnights [2009-01-24 03:36:25 +0000 UTC]
I love the concept of this poem. It's a very important message, I'm glad you're putting it out there!
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MissUnderstand [2009-01-24 01:32:18 +0000 UTC]
Oh look at you, Mr.Positivity.
life would lack for love
without a little
falling
find the future
full of feeling
at your fingertips
Very nice.
Inspirational.
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YouInventedMe In reply to MissUnderstand [2009-01-24 01:36:14 +0000 UTC]
positively absolutely
thank you
xo!
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antiaircraft [2009-01-21 11:55:11 +0000 UTC]
have a little faith!
throw caution to the wind
leap without looking
Something I'll definitely be considering
Inspiring words!
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YouInventedMe In reply to antiaircraft [2009-01-21 20:53:31 +0000 UTC]
thanks. that particular
bit was all my partner in crime.
xo!
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Infinite-Ink [2009-01-20 05:51:15 +0000 UTC]
"life would lack for love
without a little
falling"
Beautiful.
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YouInventedMe In reply to TheseKrimzonFlames [2009-01-20 06:06:49 +0000 UTC]
thank you, sir
xo!
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sandmanno3 [2009-01-19 03:03:42 +0000 UTC]
hahah, awesome guys.
A might write another one these now.
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pseudometry [2009-01-19 01:39:38 +0000 UTC]
Wonderful piece!
Love those first three strophes. The vitamins. The walking in the sun. Yes yes.
And here's to that final strophe:
life would lack for love
without a little
falling
find the future
full of feeling
at your fingertips
I want to live more like this. Haha. I think you two have hit a nerve with this one.
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like2eatchinese [2009-01-19 01:23:01 +0000 UTC]
the indians eat with their hands.
they know whats up
i really liked this
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YouInventedMe In reply to like2eatchinese [2009-01-19 01:59:54 +0000 UTC]
they keep it mad real
and thank you
xo!
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Piscesandthediamonds [2009-01-18 23:48:51 +0000 UTC]
"eat with your hands and
talk to strangers
from the proper angle
every face looks like
an angel's
each moment
bears the makings
of a miracle" It is nourishing to remember the sunshine. Congrats to you both
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YouInventedMe In reply to Piscesandthediamonds [2009-01-19 00:24:02 +0000 UTC]
thank you
xo!
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