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don't fade away!eat vitamins
walk in the sun
make the time
to take the time
to breathe
and be
the beauty
that surrounds you
recapture your spark!
eat with your hands and
talk to strangers
from the proper angle
every face looks like
an angel's
each moment
bears the makings
of a miracle
have a little faith!
throw caution to the wind
leap without looking
life would lack for love
without a little
falling
find the future
full of feeling
at your fingertips
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Comments: 121
bright-water-fox In reply to ??? [2009-01-18 21:21:42 +0000 UTC]
It isn't my favorite thing that you've written, but I do like the overall concept.
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YouInventedMe In reply to bright-water-fox [2009-01-18 21:53:06 +0000 UTC]
thank you
xo!
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takenoko [2009-01-18 21:08:56 +0000 UTC]
How true. I'm going to remind myself of these things as well
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amywalrus In reply to ??? [2009-01-18 18:48:38 +0000 UTC]
Thank you for writing this. You always seem to write what I need to read.
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AngeliqueAlene In reply to ??? [2009-01-18 06:42:21 +0000 UTC]
It is very.. striking. I think the word may be.
Very good at least. =]
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YouInventedMe In reply to AngeliqueAlene [2009-01-18 21:52:00 +0000 UTC]
very good works for me. thanks.
xo!
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Gunsh1n [2009-01-18 06:20:15 +0000 UTC]
okay, this is perfect!
i feel i need to do all these things.
can i print this out and hang it on my door so i can read it every day until its memorized into my everyday living?
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YouInventedMe In reply to Gunsh1n [2009-01-18 21:51:20 +0000 UTC]
please do
and thanks a lot.
xo!
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YouInventedMe In reply to Hyetthramine [2009-01-18 21:49:43 +0000 UTC]
thanks.
I'm an expert at riding coattails.
xo!
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ItsxMagik In reply to ??? [2009-01-18 03:14:43 +0000 UTC]
make the time
to take the time
to breathe
and be
the beauty
that surrounds you
Yes. I need to do that more.
This is astounding. Instant !
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Blueskye27 [2009-01-18 03:11:03 +0000 UTC]
"Eat with your hands and talk to strangers" - I so love that...
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YouInventedMe In reply to Blueskye27 [2009-01-18 21:46:31 +0000 UTC]
thanks, cindy.
that line was all dani.
xo!
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YouInventedMe In reply to AdamoVita [2009-01-18 21:46:20 +0000 UTC]
thank you very much
xo!
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AdamoVita In reply to YouInventedMe [2009-01-19 03:59:14 +0000 UTC]
You're very welcome
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curiouzkatt [2009-01-18 02:48:00 +0000 UTC]
very beautiful! can I print it and post it in my office wall? I think it would be very for my counselees. :3
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YouInventedMe In reply to curiouzkatt [2009-01-18 21:46:12 +0000 UTC]
thanks. print&ost away
xo!
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superlauren In reply to ??? [2009-01-18 02:06:23 +0000 UTC]
This really is beautiful, Shane! I especially like
"from the proper angle
every face looks like
an angel's
each moment
bears the makings
of a miracle"
I think I'll write this out and put it on my wall :]
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YouInventedMe In reply to superlauren [2009-01-18 02:13:13 +0000 UTC]
thank you very much.
it's an honor to be wallbound.
xo!
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forWinds In reply to ??? [2009-01-18 00:22:30 +0000 UTC]
Nice alliteration in the last stanza!
and I'll get working on our piece as soon as I can! I'm sorry it's taking so long.
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YouInventedMe In reply to forWinds [2009-01-18 00:27:41 +0000 UTC]
thanks
and no worries
take all the time you need
xo!
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Notoday In reply to ??? [2009-01-18 00:05:17 +0000 UTC]
This makes me happy.
I need advice a lot of the time.
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venividiexii In reply to ??? [2009-01-17 23:35:58 +0000 UTC]
It is so rare that I like poetry that cheers me up instead of bringing me down but you can do it anytime. Thank you.
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YouInventedMe In reply to venividiexii [2009-01-17 23:37:13 +0000 UTC]
always happy to be of service.
thank you.
xo!
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SummerSunshine26 In reply to ??? [2009-01-17 23:19:02 +0000 UTC]
This is gorgeous- I finished reading with a smile
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YouInventedMe In reply to SummerSunshine26 [2009-01-17 23:21:14 +0000 UTC]
thank you very much
xo!
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shackell In reply to ??? [2009-01-17 23:07:11 +0000 UTC]
Hey! Quit tapping lovingly on my ribcage with that stethoscope!
"eat with your hands"
My hands and I have been at odds for quite some time. I don't know if they'll go have a meal with me.
I'll call them up.
*dials with nose*
I have a date!
With my hands.
Eww...
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YouInventedMe In reply to shackell [2009-01-17 23:09:05 +0000 UTC]
this comment alone would have
made writing this worth it
tell your hands I said hello,
and thank you
xo!
ps. the thank you is for you
not your hands
pps. ah, heck - you can thank your hands too
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brokenthought7 In reply to ??? [2009-01-17 22:11:19 +0000 UTC]
a spark of motivationβ₯
this is luv
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YouInventedMe In reply to brokenthought7 [2009-01-17 22:28:38 +0000 UTC]
thanks a lot
xo!
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brokenthought7 In reply to YouInventedMe [2009-01-17 22:37:52 +0000 UTC]
ur very welcome xD
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summernightangel In reply to ??? [2009-01-17 20:21:03 +0000 UTC]
This is really inspiring and sweet, a reminder to live for the little stuff
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