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Published: 2009-07-30 00:59:03 +0000 UTC; Views: 13002; Favourites: 562; Downloads: 525
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This is a little sketch I did in my down time between Otakon and Connecticon. A demon maid girl in kind of a maid/bondage kind of outfit. She is an OC, and her name is going to be Lilin, and on the plate she is holding would be Verin, a little bat like demon who thinks he is all powerful, but is really quite a push over. I will probably go on to ink and color this piece, and when I do I will make an effort to fix her damn hand... Fucking hands...For once I am going to try this "request critiques" feature. If you do decide to critique, please be kind, don't be all "Your art is bad and you should feel bad!".
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its a beautiful peice.. as you mentioned in the write up... yeah. the hands. ^_^ but wonderful over all. I love the pose, her outfit is great, the tray in her hand withthe thing on it is soooo cute. I love her expression and her hair. I worship you lol. this is is wonderful.
The flow of the picture overall of the picture is stupendous.. wonderful. ((and yes, i'm filling space for the critique so it can accept it. lol. anywho.)) i look forward for more great works form you . please keep it up. wonderful work.very beautiful. i do say so.
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Interesting concept. I've been waiting for the day where a recognized anthro artist such as yourself turned on the critique feature and that day has come. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/l/lā¦ " width="15" height="15" alt="
The overall stature of the character is pretty well done, along with the outfit and general design. The outfit clearly portrays suggestiveness, which is what you were going for, and it's done well. I have no real critique towards the outfit, it seems to be in correct proportion.
Her right hand (our left) seems a bit small. Hands can be challenging to draw, but I'm sure with your experience you can easily fix that problem. Also, she seems to be trying to hold her hip. The way you positioned her hand it kind of looks like it's floating off and is disproportionate.
I like the little bat guy on the platter. Verin, I take it. I like the way you described his personality. Cute.
The hair was done nicely, that's something I like about your artwork. I like how you do hair. Lots of detail in the strands, more than I typically see in work like this, so it's a good thing to pay attention to.
Overall it's pretty good, you did good like usual. The hand needs some work but I'm sure you already know that, and it wouldn't take very long to fix.
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Thanks for the critique. I was already aware of the problem with the hand. I appreciate your input a lot.
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You're welcome.
The critique feature can be very useful for getting in-depth comments from artists rather than the typical "that's pretty cool". I always recommend using it and hope that you will use it often in the future.
Keep it up.
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wow if the maids are so freaking hot in hell then i will be even eviler!! >:3
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THAT is only in pencil?! Jeesu Christ you're awesome!
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is very very beautiful, is perfect, you is super
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If I go to hell do I get a maid like her?
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If she's serving in Hell I'd like to have my own little Dante's Inferno, except without the threat of eternal damnation part.
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lovely sketch i love the way you done the hair and eyes. she is so pretty
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Please... Please please... Put some colors on this...
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Forget the hell maid I want what she's got on her platter >w< *wants to steal*
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awesome picture!
and don't worry about the handS! "FUCKING HANDS!!!!!!!!!"
hands are always a bitch to do
i thought i was alone on that one
BUT amazing picture for a scetch!
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This is really good
I can't wait to see her colored
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That's one sexy maid. I want to go to hell now.
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man your good
if someone sees a flaw with this please tell em,i don't see it
her face reminds me of yu-yu-hakusho for some reason
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Well, sign me up for one spot in Hell 
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Maids also look fairly similar to this in heaven.
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lilin means "candle" in malay..
very nice drawing
most guys would wanna go to hell if maids in hell rly look like her..lol
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I'm going to hell anyway, now I know I'll enjoy it. XD
Great pic.
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Great Drawing! All that I can think of to fix is her right hand. I think the left hand looks fine. Keep up the good work!
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*in hell*
... i liek where this is going =3
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if that is the case i will happily go there! awesome job!
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lol i thought you didnt want to go to hell? very nice
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Thats actually really funny XD
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How may I be of service... You bad boy!
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ETNAAAAAAAAAA!!! Epic.
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Everything is better in hell.
Your pencil work is amazing here, especially the toning.
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Wow!
Wonder what the chamber maid looks like!!!
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from what i remember from hell the eyes were... sharper i guess
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