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zargon-yokoshima — sketch book end fan service 03
Published: 2004-01-17 10:32:36 +0000 UTC; Views: 296; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 25
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Yay! 2004 has officialy started for me. This is the last page in my 2003 sketch book, and I decided to post a hot spring type pic with Terra and Tiberis. Terra's wearing a bathing suit cause she's a blurdy westerner like me (AND WOULDN'T BE CAUGHT DEAD NAKED). Um, also I'm not a complete perv, so that's another reason why she's not nude like Tiberis (so maybe I'm only half a one).
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You've done a nice job of drawing her from the back. The anatomy is mostly okay, except for her left forearm (it's way too long), her right arm (the top half of it can't bend as much as you've shown there – it's a straight bone, so although the skin and flesh can have some effect on the shape it's still never going to be very curvy) and also anime girls of her physique tend to have rounder butts – the top half is fine, but the lower half just goes straight down to her thigh and makes her look very muscular in that area.
You've done a really nice job of the ripples around her hand, and if you do the same thing around the areas where her thighs meet the water, then it would look much less like she's a legless person in mid air.
I don't mean to be harsh, I just wanted to point those things out to you so that you're able to improve if you want to. If you're simply drawing for fun, and don't mind keeping things imperfect, that's fine and you can ignore what I said.
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That's a wonderful send-off for 2003, I'm sure it appreciates it lol
and I look forward to all your great art in 2004!
by the way, kudos for that excellent rippling effect you did with the shading.
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Well... it is a hot springs bath so I would say that the Tiberis character is perfectly er... attired... for it. 
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Without saying too much... Very well done!
Ur-Draco
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Oh, but thanks for the comment! That's more important to say than naming my shortcomings.
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Eh.... I think maybe I coulda done better on the shading. Perhaps just on the water that's below Terra.
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hey its a good pic, usually if i draw anime the hand or shoulder yadda yadda is out of proportion, but this is really good
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