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Published: 2001-11-13 14:16:21 +0000 UTC; Views: 274; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 38
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ok, here it is, v2. what do u think now?comentz plz
opticnerve made me do it
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opticnerve [2001-11-13 14:31:56 +0000 UTC]
Looking at them side by side - I think the new piece is a step in the right direction!
Adding uneven vertical shading would help, but also may distract from the alien creepy things.
good work!
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opticnerve [2001-11-13 14:24:13 +0000 UTC]
Woa! for what it may have lost is subtlety it has made up for in impact!
I have just had a cool idea - go 50%-50% between your last piece and this piece, but apply non linear colouring across the length of the _things_ to make them move in and out of the screen, not just left and right, this must be very subtle though, else it will spoil the mood.
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