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Every light casts a shadow.EDIT: I didn't think I'd have to say this, but she is a girl.
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SlashingTaste [2015-02-06 09:29:33 +0000 UTC]
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A rippling two ton eraser beam calls for the darkness
The way he places his feet recalls of his ancestors
From the past comes to the present
He is reminded of all the torment
His cry was that of ecstasy
He couldn't tell or judge morally
He is the one who is chosen although it seems
His wild character is promising to all forms of beings.
The eye turns a crimson to it has now bled
It goes back to human form now it has to be fed
For it to keep himself together
His thirst for hunger is quiet a sunder
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FullMetal-TrevDay [2015-02-06 06:07:58 +0000 UTC]
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I really like the flow of it and the composition over-all. The little details and the tonal range are probably my favorite parts. Good shading. I think it had a good mid tone that you worked with. I really like the concept of the phantom/ demonic weapon and the integration it has with the character him/herself (I'm assuming it is a boy). The drawing has good motion to it in that it looks as though he is about to spring into action with an attack. I like that the shading in the back was added because it makes the white on the character pop out even more and adds more motion. Great Job! It was fun critiquing this work. Oh, and the title is very suiting. Keep making awesome drawings!!
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Zerxees In reply to FullMetal-TrevDay [2015-02-06 06:36:35 +0000 UTC]
I just wanted to say thank you for taking the time to critique. I really appreciate the input as it's a big help in expanding upon my skills as an artist. Also I'd just like to clarify, she is a girl, though one with a petite physique a bit of a boyish charm.
Thanks again for the feedback!
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FullMetal-TrevDay In reply to Zerxees [2015-02-06 06:41:29 +0000 UTC]
Sure thing lol! Sorry for the gender confusion Haha.
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Zerxees In reply to jang010 [2015-02-07 00:24:24 +0000 UTC]
Her, but thank you regardless. I'm really glad you like it.
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jang010 In reply to Zerxees [2015-02-07 06:34:23 +0000 UTC]
oh sorry didn't know she was a girl
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FullMetal-TrevDay [2015-02-06 06:08:13 +0000 UTC]
Really Cool! I really like the flow of it and the composition over-all. The little details and the tonal range are probably my favorite parts. Awesome!
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nhok9 [2015-02-06 05:36:05 +0000 UTC]
.__. u can also use this as an update for your oc if u want ....
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Zerxees In reply to nhok9 [2015-02-06 06:16:40 +0000 UTC]
I appreciate it, but this really isn't the direction I'm taking my oc. This is really more of a quick stepping stone to the bigger whole that I'm trying to build up to.
Also, I really hope you don't think I'm trying to steal your idea(I just not sure of the exact tone of your comment). This is the first time I've seen your work, but I really like it. I myself am a big fan of darker, edgier works like that.
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nhok9 In reply to Zerxees [2015-02-06 06:19:52 +0000 UTC]
oh is cool i mean ^^ that i know that shadowry character is a thing C: i just want give u some of my ideas C: also thanks xD ... am no hater brah
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