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zphoenixdownz — wishing requiem
Published: 2004-06-13 16:16:06 +0000 UTC; Views: 250; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 49
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Description i want to drown in a wave of sound
my limp flesh hanging just below the crest
body born away by means of salt water space
in matter made of tones and thoughts built of bone

i want my ghost to sit upon the audio cliff
and appear to watch the sonic maelstrom descend
so it can bear witness to heaven in stereo
my efforts to decompose into a whirlpool of notes
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Comments: 7

flamemc [2004-06-17 12:23:22 +0000 UTC]

For the love of music?

I like.

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zphoenixdownz In reply to flamemc [2004-06-19 03:33:49 +0000 UTC]

yes sir... sometimes it hits you just right, where you feel like you're drifting into the afterlife...

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theunwarymariner [2004-06-17 03:28:37 +0000 UTC]

wow! this piece might possibly be my favorite from you, honestly. this feels much more "grown up" (for a lack of better words) than your previous stuff and even moreso than the last poem you just posted. very nice, i really have no critique, just praise.

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zphoenixdownz In reply to theunwarymariner [2004-06-19 03:36:50 +0000 UTC]

thanks for the fave

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theunwarymariner In reply to zphoenixdownz [2004-06-20 09:24:47 +0000 UTC]

of course. the favs are only given where they are deserved. hey biotch, hit me up via e-mail or note here when you gots some film talk to discuss.i hope that you're well. take care.

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carissima82 [2004-06-14 19:33:53 +0000 UTC]

kind of odd.
but still enjoyable.

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voices [2004-06-14 13:56:27 +0000 UTC]

the last verse was weird, audio cliff!!

but it made sense, in my head

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