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Published: 2012-09-20 21:55:43 +0000 UTC; Views: 291; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 3
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wanja our sweet german sheperdmore detailed and more finished now..
hope you like her.
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Comments: 11
EclecticQuill [2012-10-06 10:26:54 +0000 UTC]
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In terms of vision, the artist has always had a good eye for detail within her style. This particular painting shows steady progress with realism, without sacrificing that essential something which marks out her work.
It's near impossible to be truly original, with the sheer amounts of works in the world today, doubly so with such a limited field as portraits. However, I believe the true originality of *zulou 's work lies in it's style, rather than its subject.
The technique is good, with visible texture to the fur and lighting used to good effect. The eyes too show a good level of technique. The framing is also impressive, but doesn't distract from the centre of focus (the dog).
In terms of impact, the image is fairly striking, but also quite understated. The eye could easily drift over it, but in so doing, the eye misses a good piece of artwork. When viewed, the image does have impact, though it is a subtler thing in this picture. Subtlety vs Boldness is something for individuals to decide for themselves, as to which they prefer.
Overall I think this is a very good painting, and shows a good level of competence, and for those of us who have followed her work, it shows her progress and improvement.
Congratulations Zuleika, it's a great piece of work. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="
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Saellek-Star [2012-09-20 22:12:12 +0000 UTC]
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I can definitely see the improvement! I love the subtle colors in the background, they look great e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="
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The overall shading made a big difference! I'm still amazed at the little fur-lines e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="
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I also think this portrait shows a lot of personality. This dog looks wise and kind...I think it's the eyes that do it! I love German shepherds...I want one someday X3
One more thing: good job with keeping the fur texture the right size all over the face...like it's shorter on the muzzle/around the eyes and longer on the cheeks, which is the right way to do it! A lot of people keep the same fur texture all over, but here you kept it realistic, good job on the update!
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zulou In reply to Saellek-Star [2012-09-20 22:17:26 +0000 UTC]
thank you very much ^^ happy the improvement shows ^^ and she is wise, kind and a little old although she does not look that old ^^
but seeing you got to know her by my drawing means I cought her spirit well ^^
thanks again dear
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AvariAkori [2012-09-20 22:01:11 +0000 UTC]
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This art...is one showcase. This one puts an imprint on me. It has great porportion, nothing is lopsided. Hun, this is fabo! Continue with the art. God gave you a talent. I do not see anything wrong with this magnificent piece of work. Your dog seems lovely. Wanja...A nice name. I do have one tip, try not to outline the ears so darkly with de line :3 But far out I can't really critize it saying it's terrible, for it's not e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="
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zulou In reply to AvariAkori [2012-09-20 22:03:51 +0000 UTC]
thank you very much and ill keep the tip for next time
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zulou In reply to EclecticQuill [2012-10-07 07:34:21 +0000 UTC]
tnx for the great crit as well ^^
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