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THIS WORK WILL NOT MAKE ANY SENSE UNLESS YOU HAVE READ MY PREVIOUS STORY LINES FOR CHIHIRO. CHECK MY DGM FOLDER IN MY GALLERY IF YOU HAVEN'T READ THE STORIES SO FARThis was long to do. This pic goes with this teaser here:[link]
Poor Chihiro...she doesn't look too happy here. This works probably more symbolic than anything. Now allow me to explain this work...
As I said in this:[link] soon after Allen is discovered to be the 14ths host, Chihiro is suspected to one day turn on the order and/or become a fallen one. The reason for such suspensions is because Leverrier and Komui discover that Chihiro's mother is a Noah. Not only that but Chihiro is later caught sneaking into central agency and stealing certain files of a certain exorcist: Yu Kanda. Chihiro's reason for stealing the file is because she learns of something named "The second and third exorcist program" and becomes curious so she steals the file. After reading it, some of the scientists(don't ask me who) discover Chihiro had broken into central agency and stole private files. And it doesn't stop there. Hevlaska tells the order that shortly after Chihiro discovers what her fathers true nature was, which can be found in this work:[link] , Chi's syncro rate with her innocence begins to drop and she begins to act differently around the order.
As time wares on, Chihiro develops a secret extreme hatred for the order. For many reasons. For one, she hates the order for what they did to the man she loves, Yu Kanda and his friend Alma Karma in the second exorcist program. She finds out the true nature of the order when she first meets Leverrier and Link one day while passing by the meeting room where the generals were holding the meeting (episode 90 something of the anime...). Chihiro also hates the order even more when she witnesses Alma Karma's memories with Allen and Kanda, which is manga chapter 190 and 191. She also witnesses the awakening of Alma Karma and the fight between Allen, Alma, and Kanda. And she also becomes aware of the third exorcists which is the fusion of akuma's DNA into an exorcist to make them part akuma.
After all this crap happens, Chihiro turns into a different person as I said. She acts darker and always fakes emotions. And her syncro rate with her innocence continues to drop, pushing the risk of her becoming a fallen one. To prevent the order losing another exorcist, Leverrier orders the crows to capture and imprison Chihiro at central agency. There she discovers the others had suspected her of being a traitor and is locked away in a cell. Following that Leverrier decides to try something new central agency had been working on in secret. The crows perform some sort of ritual on Chi which causes red marks to appear on her hands and legs and chest. These markings will keep Chihiro's syncro rate from falling any lower so she won't be able to become a fallen one and will force her to use her innocence against her will. However, since this experiment is new and had never been used before, it could very possibly kill Chihiro at any time. Chi is the first exorcist this experiment is performed on and now Chihiro is bound to the order forever, no matter what. And thats not even the worst part. Those markings will also be able to tell if she tries to use her innocence to attack anyone or anything in the order and if that happens, it will send a wave a pain through her body. Think of it as a shock collar in a way. If she tries to do something bad, the marks will punish her for it, almost as if shes cursed.
Chihiro is kept in her prison cell at central agency and is only released when she is to go on assignment. After an assignment is complete, she is returned to her cell and locked up. She is not a loud any visitors or any contact with anybody in or outside the order. This includes other exorcists. If she disobeys, she is tortured horribly, but not to the point of killing her. Leverrier believes this is a fitting punishment for a girl who was going to turn against the order and become a fallen one in the future.
On a side note: While she is locked away in the prison cell at central agency she kinda goes...well insane. She starts doing things like tearing off her skin, as she believes that will destroy the marks that had been put on her by the crows. She also hurts and cuts herself and tries several times to commit suicide to escape the hell that is the Black order but always fails. And when Chi does these things, she is punished by central agency who sends her to a torture chamber as punishment which hurts her both mentally and physically. Poor Chi D:
I'm rly sorry if thats too confusing
Short version of this storyline: Chihiro comes to hate the order. Leverrier suspects her of becoming a fallen one and traitor for various reasons and imprisons her where he has crow perform a new experiment on her. The experiment gives her what could be known as "curse marks" and will keep her from becoming a fallen one. She is then kept in her prison cell until she has missions and then after missions, she is put back into her cell, like a pet in a cage. She is not aloud to communicate with anyone or try to hurt/kill herself or else she is punished by central agency.
Btw, I tried to do a darkness/light thing on this pic. The red on the dark side of the pic is blood, to represent the gore and violence of when Chi goes into battle. The light reflects how the order is suppose to and SHOULD be but is not. The words on the pic are said by Leverrier when he first locks Chihiro up in her prison cell. So just like Lenalee, Chihiro can never escape the order or being an exorcist.
And guys, I'll just note that the pic of Kanda stabbing Chi found here:[link] is a nightmare Chihiro has when she is first locked up in prison. I decided to just make it a dream so it doesn't rly happen...yet.
base used is by
D gray man and its characters c) Katsura Hoshino
Chi and the storyline c) Me
The work that shows how and when Chihiro got those marks:[link]
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Comments: 68
Janinna [2013-05-27 00:08:40 +0000 UTC]
I've noticed... You did really well at making it easy for people to follow the story line for a while... then all of a sudden, BAM! Hard to follow... It's like a big huge jumble of stories... I don't even know what comes right after this: [link]
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albertxlailaxx In reply to Janinna [2013-05-27 00:13:02 +0000 UTC]
I apologize. Perhaps its because I stopped writing things in actual fic form where there was more detail. It doesn't matter much now anyways, seeing as a lot hate this character anyways. I've kind of given up on putting effort into her story anymore :/
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Janinna In reply to albertxlailaxx [2013-05-27 01:11:03 +0000 UTC]
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww! <:I WHO COULD HATE CHI?!?!?!?! She's one person I could never hate! She has reason for being the way she is! D:> I like her story a LOT! ... erm... maybe you could help me out with this, though? so that I can continue a bit more easily?
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albertxlailaxx In reply to Janinna [2013-05-27 02:43:14 +0000 UTC]
Hate art has been done of her many times, clubs made, and so on. Ppl also hate her son Katsuo. So thus why I gave up on their stories pretty much. I still write stuff but... theyre crappy OCs so I figure, whats the point.
I could try. What don't you understand?
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Janinna In reply to albertxlailaxx [2013-05-27 05:56:26 +0000 UTC]
where to go to get to the next part that you have up...
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albertxlailaxx In reply to Janinna [2013-05-27 19:33:12 +0000 UTC]
after this pic? well from here on, her story gets random. but i guess this would qualify as the next part:[link]
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Janinna In reply to albertxlailaxx [2013-05-27 19:49:55 +0000 UTC]
okay... well... I have tried to figure it out myself, and I have read that one...
I guess I'm just confused on what order to read things... a list would help most...
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albertxlailaxx In reply to Janinna [2013-05-27 22:07:15 +0000 UTC]
well...in my gallery, in the DGM folder; the works of my OC are in order. But because of the way I write them, the stories make no sense and the stories are crap Like I said before, I apologize.
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Janinna In reply to albertxlailaxx [2013-05-27 22:15:38 +0000 UTC]
okay... ^^ Look where I'M AAAAAAAAAAAAAAT! [link]
Just finished a bit ago!!!
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albertxlailaxx In reply to Janinna [2013-05-27 22:40:29 +0000 UTC]
I see. I'm glad you're actually interested enough to read on. Thank you very much for taking an interest.
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Janinna In reply to albertxlailaxx [2013-05-28 00:39:16 +0000 UTC]
^^ It's very good! As long as there are people who like something, there is no reason to get rid of it! That is... as long as it's proven to be safe! (meaning, stuff like smoking SHOULD be gotten rid of!!!)
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albertxlailaxx In reply to Janinna [2013-05-28 02:32:46 +0000 UTC]
I agree with that sentiment. Thank you again.
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albertxlailaxx In reply to JayCookie1997 [2012-04-21 18:35:48 +0000 UTC]
Holy crap, that song is awesome o3o
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JayCookie1997 In reply to albertxlailaxx [2012-04-21 18:52:08 +0000 UTC]
It's so awesome I'm STILL listening to it!
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beyblade23 [2011-11-29 03:59:08 +0000 UTC]
I totally have a love/hate relationship with the storyline! Ouch, that experiment sounds like painful .________.lllll
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albertxlailaxx In reply to beyblade23 [2011-11-29 20:30:19 +0000 UTC]
was this story line more or less confusing than the last one? o3O
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beyblade23 In reply to albertxlailaxx [2011-11-30 01:47:50 +0000 UTC]
Less confusing = P But now that I know that the last one was a dream, not confused anymore~
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beyblade23 In reply to albertxlailaxx [2011-11-29 04:19:26 +0000 UTC]
I'm afraid to know what'll happen next .______.;;;
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albertxlailaxx In reply to beyblade23 [2011-11-29 04:30:26 +0000 UTC]
at this point i dont think i could do anything worst to chi than what ive already done. oh yeah i still have to do a work explaining one more thing about her father so that may be up tomorrow xD
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SkeletonHunter96 [2011-11-29 03:25:56 +0000 UTC]
This pic looks awesome how did you make the background effects?
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albertxlailaxx In reply to SkeletonHunter96 [2011-11-29 03:26:43 +0000 UTC]
i just used different brushes
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SkeletonHunter96 In reply to albertxlailaxx [2011-12-28 15:25:56 +0000 UTC]
This song reminds me of Chihiro [link]
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albertxlailaxx In reply to SkeletonHunter96 [2011-12-28 18:03:24 +0000 UTC]
I've heard that song many times and have it on CD. Yeah, I guess it does suit Chi in some ways.
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SkeletonHunter96 In reply to albertxlailaxx [2011-12-28 19:54:54 +0000 UTC]
I just bought the second season of D Grey Man but couldn't find the first season at the store I went to.
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SkeletonHunter96 In reply to albertxlailaxx [2011-12-29 01:56:47 +0000 UTC]
I might make an OC then too I am also getting hooked on the Zelda Game series XD I got the newest Wii game called The Legend of Zelda Skyward Sword and also got Zelda Ocarina of Time for the 3DS and both games are cool
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albertxlailaxx In reply to SkeletonHunter96 [2011-12-29 06:29:21 +0000 UTC]
I've never once played a Zelda game in my life lol
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SkeletonHunter96 In reply to albertxlailaxx [2011-12-29 06:31:05 +0000 UTC]
XD I am thinking of making my D.Grey Man OC after watching some tomorrow
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albertxlailaxx In reply to SkeletonHunter96 [2011-12-29 06:52:54 +0000 UTC]
yay Will it be a boy or girl?
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SkeletonHunter96 In reply to albertxlailaxx [2011-12-29 07:03:24 +0000 UTC]
I was actually thinking of making both a boy and a girl XD
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SkeletonHunter96 In reply to albertxlailaxx [2011-12-29 07:34:33 +0000 UTC]
I might make my female OC have a split personality where she is really kind usually but if you get on her bad side she can act kind of crazy XD
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albertxlailaxx In reply to SkeletonHunter96 [2011-12-29 17:33:52 +0000 UTC]
Reminds me of Haru Sohma from Fruits basket lol
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SkeletonHunter96 In reply to albertxlailaxx [2011-12-29 22:17:11 +0000 UTC]
I am wondering can my female OC be a childhood friend of Chi if possible?
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albertxlailaxx In reply to SkeletonHunter96 [2011-12-29 23:52:32 +0000 UTC]
Well I only had Chi have one child hood friend which was Allen. The rest of her childhood after he left sucked so it wouldn't work. But perhaps they can be friends later on
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SkeletonHunter96 In reply to albertxlailaxx [2011-12-30 00:34:38 +0000 UTC]
Sounds interesting I will work on her tonight and maybe we can have them meet at where Chi is being held in the storyline because I was planning on having my female OC be a nurse so she can accompany my male OC who is going to be in the medical field also would that work?
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SkeletonHunter96 In reply to albertxlailaxx [2011-12-30 07:17:10 +0000 UTC]
I actually just had a really interesting Idea for my One OC but surprisingly don't know how to start it off OTL I was thinking Leon and Alethea can work in the same place where Chi is being held in prison. And both of them are both exorcists also. And that is all I have so far OTL
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albertxlailaxx In reply to SkeletonHunter96 [2011-12-30 07:36:57 +0000 UTC]
Im sure youll come up wit more once u watch the rest of the series
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SkeletonHunter96 In reply to albertxlailaxx [2011-12-30 07:39:01 +0000 UTC]
KK that may be a while though XD
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SkeletonHunter96 In reply to albertxlailaxx [2011-12-29 18:07:40 +0000 UTC]
I might need help with Terms used in the DGM anime since I only have the second season at the moment I may get a little confused while making my OCs XD
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