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alyxcaptor — Final Chapter: Part Two

Published: 2009-12-03 03:36:26 +0000 UTC; Views: 5002; Favourites: 20; Downloads: 65
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Description A Guard lay in wait for Chang behind the door with a message

"General Chang, you're needed on the command deck....weve arrived sir"

"Good....keep an eye on our cargo, make sure she doesnt go anywhere" Chang replied with a smile across his face

Chang then walked with a purpose up to the command deck of the Alpha Prime.

"Report Commander..." Chang said as he arrived on the bridge.

"Sir, we've arrived at Yex-543" replied his commander as he pointed out of the main screen towards a small dark shape in the mist of space.

"Good Commander, move us closer and dock with them, inform them we are onboard a federation vessel we have stolen so thier weapons will not be needed....we come bearing gifts" Chang said as he looked out of the screen.
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HunterOpera2017 [2009-12-03 22:50:47 +0000 UTC]

I like the implied nature of the aliens - the way they carry themselves and communicate with one another.

The fact that they're intimidating as hell also helps.

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Branded-Curse [2009-12-03 16:07:09 +0000 UTC]

Did I mention yet that this alien race looks kinda creepy?

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alyxcaptor In reply to Branded-Curse [2009-12-03 18:59:59 +0000 UTC]

they do.

i think they are from gears of war somebody told me.

they do look badass in my book. perfect for a bad guy.

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Branded-Curse In reply to alyxcaptor [2009-12-03 19:08:47 +0000 UTC]

Indeed!

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