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Published: 2004-02-08 03:56:23 +0000 UTC; Views: 146; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 10
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Description I'm in tears for something that I dont have.
I'm trapped in the idea of having
Someone... anyone to want me.
Sing to me a song, play it to me on guitar
All I want is to love, and someone to love me.
You hear?

I need to be captured in love
Comfort, everything that's true
I'm swallowed up in nothingness,
Something, I need, to pull me out.
Out to you.

Clawed at my face today
Screaming out to you-anyone
Frustration's taking over- needing
Just one kiss- hug- touch on me
From love- emotions of purity
My eyes see shadows

Shadows of loves lost, falling
Faintly remembering what was had
Dark figures screaming for better days
I don't want to go to there
I want us to stay forever
I want there to be an us.

With who?
Who am I even talking to?
There can't be an 'us'
There can't
When it's just..
When it's just me.
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Comments: 19

hollybunny [2004-02-09 00:20:52 +0000 UTC]

your words flow with such emotion. we all need to wanted and needed. great images.
you never cease to amaze me. since i am an older holly...let me add this

write your song
he will hear
love yourself first
he will see
embrace yourself
he will come
when he does
the two will become one

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Sorrows-Dreamer [2004-02-08 18:32:10 +0000 UTC]

this wud make a prety funky story if u padded it put a bit

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Jomina [2004-02-08 12:23:13 +0000 UTC]

Its goodies like this that made me want to watch you to begin with, and its YOU that keeps me coming back for more

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flutter-of-wings [2004-02-08 11:16:58 +0000 UTC]

nicely done!!! you really captured emotion here, superbly written

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inpayne [2004-02-08 06:49:52 +0000 UTC]

So sad .... you capture emotion so well in your writtings.

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ares1013 [2004-02-08 05:19:43 +0000 UTC]

"...Clawed at my face today
Screaming out to you-anyone
Frustration's taking over- needing..."

Really liked those few lines, conveyed the desperation well.

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bite06me In reply to ares1013 [2004-02-08 05:24:26 +0000 UTC]

ah yes those were my three favourite lines

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insomnia-mae [2004-02-08 05:15:27 +0000 UTC]

This is sooo beautiful!! I love it sooo much!

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bite06me In reply to insomnia-mae [2004-02-08 05:20:33 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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SaDnessIncarnate [2004-02-08 05:14:56 +0000 UTC]

very very good...

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bite06me In reply to SaDnessIncarnate [2004-02-08 05:22:23 +0000 UTC]

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Angeleece [2004-02-08 04:05:14 +0000 UTC]

This Is beautiful and so are you.

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bite06me In reply to Angeleece [2004-02-08 04:07:10 +0000 UTC]

why thank you very very much

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Angeleece In reply to bite06me [2004-02-08 04:09:54 +0000 UTC]

its all good. I recognize beauty. Thats all.

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captainpugwash [2004-02-08 04:04:31 +0000 UTC]

Us with an unknown person...now where have I heard that one before...ah yes!! Thats me From the sounds of this poem, we want exactly the same things from love, we want to be close enough to someone to be hurt, yet know they would never dream of causing harm to us. Your description seems rather cryptic, maybe it adds a mystique to the poem, you never know. *writes song, plays it on guitar, captures her in his heart, one kiss, a hug, a touch of her being, attempts to be the who*

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bite06me In reply to captainpugwash [2004-02-08 04:06:10 +0000 UTC]

eeeee! ispeakinemoicons.wootwoot!


my heeeeeeeeerrrooooo

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captainpugwash In reply to bite06me [2004-02-08 04:15:05 +0000 UTC]

Do you ever stop being so cute and beautiful??

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bite06me In reply to captainpugwash [2004-02-08 04:16:27 +0000 UTC]

hehe and do you ever stop just the same??

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captainpugwash In reply to bite06me [2004-02-09 00:15:06 +0000 UTC]

well I'm afraid I pale into insignificance next to your beauty, and also your licking *licks twice as much* hows that for cute? or doesnt it count?

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