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Broken-Hearted-Again — Dance With The Devil
Published: 2006-09-23 03:00:42 +0000 UTC; Views: 465; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 4
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Description In the darkest hour it will come

In the darkest hour you will love me once again

In that hour we connect like it was the first time
First look, first touch first breath on my neck, first kiss
I feel your arms wrap around me, and a light breath on my neck,
He whispered the words "i love you, i never stopped"
We make love, our spirits soar,suddenly the wind opens the door


A cold shiver goes down my spine as i can feel it coming closer
Our time together is about to end again
I cant say goodbye again , i dont want to, i need you
Please stay with me.
You whisper in my ear with your arms still holding me tight
" You dont have to say goodbye, ill always be with you, just remember me this way"

The room gets cold, i can start to see my breath
The person behind me changes
He moves to the front, and it seems ive been dancing with the devil all night
He pulled me in with temptation, knew all my hopes but used my fears
He knew where my strings where, and which direction to pull them in
It seems i have been fooled again


As he picks me up off the floor, we start to dance
Just for a few moments it turns to you again
You look me in the eyes and say
"Baby im sorry it ended this way, i never meant to hurt you"
"I know" i reply i also knew it was too late for me
I look around everything has turned hot and red

He looks me in the eye and ask's me to be his queen
To rule by his side until the end of time
Knowing this is love, this is fate
I take his hand, (poof) back to the devil he become
Walking though a cloud of smoke
Things start to change, i look at myself in the lava on the ground.

I cant believe what i see, for im no longer me

All i wanted was to be free.
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Comments: 2

Wronglyaccused [2006-09-23 04:39:38 +0000 UTC]

I've never actually read anything that you've wrote before, and I'm glad I did today.

You've actually got something. There is something interesting, a spark if you will, that kept me reading without looking away.

If this piece had one more read over on your behalf, and one or two things were fixed, this would be perfect.

But for now, it's near perfect enough.

Bravo!

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Broken-Hearted-Again In reply to Wronglyaccused [2006-09-23 04:56:19 +0000 UTC]

aww thank you

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