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Broken-Hearted-Again — Somthing Missing
Published: 2004-09-02 13:36:57 +0000 UTC; Views: 150; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 9
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I am leaving here today,and part of me has gone astray.
I feel I'm leaving something behind,
I've checked everywhere, I'm losing my mind.
In the closet, under the bed,
maybe it's only in my head.
I list everything I brought,
it's all here, that's what I thought.
As I get into the car, I think back,
there's nothing I haven't packed.
I'm driving now, and it's midday,
something's missing, I wanted to stay.
When I get home it's half past eight,
I didn't know it was so late.
And now I realize the cost,
the something that I felt was lost.
I didn't think to check with you,
but now it's gone, and what to do?
The thing I thought I'd never lose,
but when it leaves you cannot choose.
We only met just months ago,
how was I ever to know?
My deep and loving, caring part,
is back with you... you hold my heart.
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Comments: 13
Wonderful poem you got there!! 
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Wow. This is really good. I mean, the ending is shocking (in a good way).. It amazes the reader... because it didn't tell until the end. Great job!
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O.o That's a really awsome poem!! You don't really understand the poem until the end, when everything is explained!!! Then everything makes sense and you realize how great the poem is!!! 
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You're welcome!! ^_^
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I really like this--
'The thing I thought I'd never lose,
but when it leaves you cannot choose.
We only met just months ago,
how was I ever to know?'
It's so true. Me and my B/F have had a few times where we almost lost each other. And it's so true how you never know how much you really love someone till there gone or nearly gone in my case.
This has to be added to my favs!
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thanks
unfornatly for me though i lost the guy
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hmm, very deep poem, very sad as well, but very well written. 
"The thing I thought I'd never lose,
but when it leaves you cannot choose."
very different way of stating "you never love someone until they're gone" but in such a more poetic way, nice job ^_^
commented by: *GingerbreadxCoffin
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thank you so much hey
i like this poem aswell i did think of writing it that way but the type opf person i am i lke for things to stand out lol and i guess i did a good job if this cought your eye
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