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Broken-Hearted-Again — Somthing Missing
Published: 2004-09-02 13:36:57 +0000 UTC; Views: 150; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 9
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Description I am leaving here today,
and part of me has gone astray.
I feel I'm leaving something behind,
I've checked everywhere, I'm losing my mind.
In the closet, under the bed,
maybe it's only in my head.
I list everything I brought,
it's all here, that's what I thought.

As I get into the car, I think back,
there's nothing I haven't packed.
I'm driving now, and it's midday,
something's missing, I wanted to stay.
When I get home it's half past eight,
I didn't know it was so late.
And now I realize the cost,
the something that I felt was lost.

I didn't think to check with you,
but now it's gone, and what to do?
The thing I thought I'd never lose,
but when it leaves you cannot choose.
We only met just months ago,
how was I ever to know?
My deep and loving, caring part,
is back with you... you hold my heart.
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Comments: 13

broken-empty-machine [2004-09-12 13:36:58 +0000 UTC]

Wonderful poem you got there!! It's really good keep up the great work!!

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Broken-Hearted-Again In reply to broken-empty-machine [2004-09-12 17:06:18 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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ThisOneGirl16 [2004-09-05 20:12:11 +0000 UTC]

Wow. This is really good. I mean, the ending is shocking (in a good way).. It amazes the reader... because it didn't tell until the end. Great job!

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Broken-Hearted-Again In reply to ThisOneGirl16 [2004-09-05 23:40:20 +0000 UTC]

thanks very much hey means alot that my poem has touch alot of people

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bEsTxkEpTxsEcReT [2004-09-03 18:52:57 +0000 UTC]

i like the ending

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Broken-Hearted-Again In reply to bEsTxkEpTxsEcReT [2004-09-03 22:52:19 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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brideath [2004-09-02 21:20:43 +0000 UTC]

O.o That's a really awsome poem!! You don't really understand the poem until the end, when everything is explained!!! Then everything makes sense and you realize how great the poem is!!! Great job!!! ^_^

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Broken-Hearted-Again In reply to brideath [2004-09-03 03:31:05 +0000 UTC]

thank you very much

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brideath In reply to Broken-Hearted-Again [2004-09-04 18:31:28 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!! ^_^

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ElvishPrincess [2004-09-02 15:01:27 +0000 UTC]

I really like this--

'The thing I thought I'd never lose,
but when it leaves you cannot choose.
We only met just months ago,
how was I ever to know?'

It's so true. Me and my B/F have had a few times where we almost lost each other. And it's so true how you never know how much you really love someone till there gone or nearly gone in my case.

This has to be added to my favs! Great job!

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Broken-Hearted-Again In reply to ElvishPrincess [2004-09-02 15:03:35 +0000 UTC]

thanks
unfornatly for me though i lost the guy

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Monolith-Verses [2004-09-02 13:44:42 +0000 UTC]

hmm, very deep poem, very sad as well, but very well written. i truly like this quote :
"The thing I thought I'd never lose,
but when it leaves you cannot choose."

very different way of stating "you never love someone until they're gone" but in such a more poetic way, nice job ^_^

commented by: *GingerbreadxCoffin

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Broken-Hearted-Again In reply to Monolith-Verses [2004-09-02 13:51:03 +0000 UTC]

thank you so much hey
i like this poem aswell i did think of writing it that way but the type opf person i am i lke for things to stand out lol and i guess i did a good job if this cought your eye and thanks for the fav aswell ment alot

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