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Published: 2018-03-21 20:36:09 +0000 UTC; Views: 3481; Favourites: 116; Downloads: 0
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imagine
a city that sings.
imagine a restless night,
a rain-washed sky, a
little cafe on the corner.
and there you are,
college-age sappho
penning poems in a
macbook, blue jeans
ripped at the knee.
neon light flickers.
your fingers dance,
your feet tap to the
rhythm on the radio,
your eyes are far away.
your shoulder blades
cast shadows on your
stardust-freckled skin.
you are lost in poetry.
you are beautiful
beyond words.
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Comments: 35
Mae-Senpai [2019-04-15 23:27:42 +0000 UTC]
I've got to say I'm moved to tears; I mean the way that you write, the actual voice you hear beyond the words; powerful! Simply marvelous! I'm sorry it took me so long to find this poem, it's simplicity and elegance makes my heart bold and swell from deep within! Many thanks! -Mae.
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Tinselfire [2019-03-26 21:39:16 +0000 UTC]
Proving once and for all you can write in the style and vein of Sappho without once referencing the sometimes-claimed compulsory narrow flame under the skin.
Well done.
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FazbearGamer05 [2019-03-26 18:35:23 +0000 UTC]
This is most beautiful thing I even read in my life
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LindArtz [2019-03-26 18:28:16 +0000 UTC]
Very nicely done!!
Congratulations on your much deserved DD!
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mbaacc [2019-03-26 17:18:58 +0000 UTC]
Everyone else: Beautiful piece darling Congratz on the DD
My wlw ass: G.g.gmd d dkdbhfjfksl g..dir isnf f
GIRLS
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TheWarOfTheRing [2018-11-29 23:27:38 +0000 UTC]
Oh man... I just reread this, and I think reading this poem must've subconsciously inspired one of my characters? Who is also named Sappho, and who is a college-age poet with far-away eyes.
either that or it's a remarkable coincidence stemming from us drawing common inspiration from Sappho of Lesbos
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callistory In reply to TheWarOfTheRing [2018-12-04 03:23:51 +0000 UTC]
The OG lesbian is very inspirational
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diddles25 [2018-07-27 04:53:35 +0000 UTC]
I'm trying to imagine this in Sapphic stanza. This sounds a lot like her lyrics (updated to modern times)... she is one of the finest singer-songwriters that I know of!
She's inspired me to compose about the beauty of men like she's inspired you to compose about the beauty of women! I can't stand that her music and most of her lyrics are lost.
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callistory In reply to diddles25 [2018-08-03 19:20:37 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much!!! And same!
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12bfeygirl42 [2018-05-20 20:29:13 +0000 UTC]
This is absolutely beautiful! Could I make a video with this? Full credit to you of course.
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callistory In reply to 12bfeygirl42 [2018-05-20 23:45:41 +0000 UTC]
That's an interesting idea! Sure! Please do let me know what comes of it!
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Ladnavar [2018-03-22 20:14:44 +0000 UTC]
The only thing that would make the moment more magical; if the cafe was Julius Meinl
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Ladnavar In reply to callistory [2018-03-22 22:09:59 +0000 UTC]
I've only been a few times, but they have spread all around the globe! I'm pretty sure they have a cold coffee flavour named Poetry~ cheeky I know, but at least they acknowledge that coffee and writing go together perfectly
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callistory In reply to talons-and-tails [2018-03-22 02:04:11 +0000 UTC]
thank you so much!!!
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spxces [2018-03-21 23:00:52 +0000 UTC]
this is so pretty......
you can tell it's written in such admiration even though you used really simple modern language
it just comes across so Nicely
i didnt know i could Love Girls even more but this poem made me into a bigger gay
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callistory In reply to spxces [2018-03-22 02:06:38 +0000 UTC]
ahh thank you! i'm so glad you liked it!
and loving girls is valid™
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Pessimist-Poetry [2018-03-21 22:46:10 +0000 UTC]
Nice piece! When you allude to "college-age sappho," are you referencing the lyric poet?
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