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Published: 2004-09-03 18:55:54 +0000 UTC; Views: 167; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 13
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crawling through your skin,swimming in your eyes,
shining through your blank stare,
i see your inner demons,
i see your truth and your lies,
everything you're ashamed to show,
things you hold so precious, things you hold inside,
i watch it drip from your wounds,
and i feel it in your bruises,
i hear you screaming, and i can see your scars,
pale and fair, inside you're torn, lost in despair,
where did you go?, tell me Erin where have you gone?,
the pretty little girl that i haven't seen in so long,
you've trapped her inside, lost the key along the way,
forgotten who YOU are,
you're turning into me.
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i'm not quite sure how i stumbled upon this, but my name is erin, and although its not so much as i'm turning into someone else,it really does seem alot like me.this part...
''i hear you screaming, and i can see your scars,
pale and fair, inside you're torn, lost in despair,
where did you go?, tell me Erin where have you gone?,
the pretty little girl that i haven't seen in so long''
anyways....i liked it.i hope you didn't mind my emotional vomit.
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wow this is great. i also love the idea. people changing especially for the worse..by turning to be like urself. great piece. i 
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you have no idea how much this poem effected me.
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erm..well i'm glad you liked it
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oh god, its like its talking about me. Which makes me sad, but that's good for a poem I guess, causing emotions. God, guess I better figure some stuff out...LOL
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wow, i was talking about my friend Erin, she really is turning into me...when i chose to take her under my wing and be her mentor i told her to be herself, not be me. but anyway,
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