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daveyrocsmysocs — black moon
Published: 2004-09-03 21:24:56 +0000 UTC; Views: 86; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 1
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Description drain me hollow,
smeared crimson lipstick,
you words are hard to swallow,
silver glitter and bloodshot eyes,
shaken and disturbed,
you stab me in the throat and twist the knife,
pulling pins out of my heart slowly,
pain from all my mistakes, falls across my face,
scattered thorns of tommarrow, curse me so,
ripped flesh of yesterday, haunt my daydreams,
poison that falls from my veins, burning as it exits,
you drain me so,
scratching at my pale profile,
your words ar so hard to swallow,
running through a field of razor blades,
you cut me up on the inside.
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Comments: 5

jlconnell [2004-09-04 03:38:19 +0000 UTC]

great poem...........very well worded..........

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daveyrocsmysocs In reply to jlconnell [2004-09-04 17:26:44 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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jlconnell In reply to daveyrocsmysocs [2004-09-04 17:44:54 +0000 UTC]

ur welcome...

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medusa11 [2004-09-03 23:04:37 +0000 UTC]

nice imagery n stuf

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daveyrocsmysocs In reply to medusa11 [2004-09-03 23:18:49 +0000 UTC]

thanks i guess

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