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Published: 2004-04-28 23:57:12 +0000 UTC; Views: 48; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 8
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Description to feel the life of the moth
i crush the butterfly
to laugh
i have to scream
to feel the glory
i must feel the pain
to catch my breath
i need to lose every ounce of oxygen
to clear my mind
i must relive every horrid moment
to feel the light
i need to rest in the dark
to fully consentrate
i must sit in chaos
to feel the life flow
i need to drain my veins hollow.
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Comments: 10

MagicalDeviantJew64 [2004-04-30 21:47:12 +0000 UTC]

Incredibly moving.... And so painfuly true.

Bravo.

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daveyrocsmysocs In reply to MagicalDeviantJew64 [2004-04-30 21:50:46 +0000 UTC]

yay thank you so much..i try to make most of my poems about an emotion or just introspective stuff...so glad you like it..

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Vimpressofdoom [2004-04-30 00:35:17 +0000 UTC]

w00t. Very powerful and awSOME

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daveyrocsmysocs In reply to Vimpressofdoom [2004-04-30 02:46:00 +0000 UTC]

thank you...

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Vimpressofdoom In reply to daveyrocsmysocs [2004-04-30 11:20:40 +0000 UTC]

welcome!

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Disillusioned-One [2004-04-29 00:03:58 +0000 UTC]

exactly. i know how that feels, buddy

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daveyrocsmysocs In reply to Disillusioned-One [2004-04-29 00:04:58 +0000 UTC]

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Disillusioned-One In reply to daveyrocsmysocs [2004-04-29 00:07:44 +0000 UTC]

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daveyrocsmysocs In reply to Disillusioned-One [2004-04-29 00:08:32 +0000 UTC]

thanks......

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Disillusioned-One In reply to daveyrocsmysocs [2004-04-29 00:09:18 +0000 UTC]

welcome

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