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daveyrocsmysocs — had enough
Published: 2004-04-14 23:34:16 +0000 UTC; Views: 59; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 4
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outsidethe sunset shines highlighted with deep pink and soft orange
the sweet smell of roses laces the light breeze
but inside
the shadows line the walls and my mind
plaqued with fear as i raise the gun to my head
no one knows how i feel
no one cares how i feel
i close my eyes with pain as too many thoughts rush through my head
had enough with this world
don't want to live like this anymore
i stand alone
i'm beside myself
i've witnessed too much pain
had enough with this world
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well done, hope things get better for you. if you ever need to talk to someone you can message me here, on yahoo, or on aim.
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haha!...bang..that was a good one!...glad you like it...
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*sigh* i've written a poem quite like this one. Although alot of people got scared that it was something i was actually going to do. i had to explain to them that poetry is meant to get these thoughts out. ...at least, i hope thats what you were doing here.
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that's exactly what i was doing i have no intention of acting upon what is in my poems...they're just feelings...
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