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Published: 2005-02-20 03:44:57 +0000 UTC; Views: 66; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 6
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Description do you have a cure for this disease?,
a solution for my suicidal tendencies?,
i hold the gun, close your eyes,
i pray that you won't suffer,
i don't want to stay alive,
step back, and watch my brain hit the fan,
bite your lip in disbelief,
as you hear the bullet and my screams,
feel the warmth for my blood trickle down your face,
as your mascara laced tears stream,
fall like they've never fallen before,
in your misery you crumble,
you wait and wait,
to hear a breath escape my cold dead lips,
a wish that will never arrive,
a longing that will live until you die.
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Comments: 10

dollsfall [2005-02-20 23:58:23 +0000 UTC]

AH CHILLS!

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daveyrocsmysocs In reply to dollsfall [2005-02-21 00:02:45 +0000 UTC]

lol, good chills? or bad chills?

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dollsfall In reply to daveyrocsmysocs [2005-02-21 00:06:52 +0000 UTC]

the good kind!

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medusa11 [2005-02-20 21:17:50 +0000 UTC]

'mascara laced tears' aww that sounds so beautiful. Wonderful poem

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daveyrocsmysocs In reply to medusa11 [2005-02-20 22:23:17 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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MyDyingRose [2005-02-20 18:09:44 +0000 UTC]

slightly graphic lol

good stuff

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daveyrocsmysocs In reply to MyDyingRose [2005-02-20 18:42:57 +0000 UTC]

lol, i'm glad you still thought it was good.

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ismwaek [2005-02-20 04:01:47 +0000 UTC]

ooh...spooky...
I like it! good job! ^-^

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daveyrocsmysocs In reply to ismwaek [2005-02-20 04:02:34 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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ismwaek In reply to daveyrocsmysocs [2005-02-20 04:04:30 +0000 UTC]

You are welcome! ^-^

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