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Published: 2004-08-12 21:21:16 +0000 UTC; Views: 83; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 8
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Description you use me,
you abuse me and still I come crawling back,
brainwashed by your lies,
you forgive me everytime,
you drain me,
you frame me, and still I love you so,
driving me to hate you is your favorite game,
you say i'm your favorite mistake,
you've molded me to something i've never wanted to be,
and the pain swims through your words into my mouth each day,
laced with a nasty taste, I utter your sins on command,
I drink your poison each day, you hand me glass after glass,
I doubt my own strenght and beg for you to love me,
I just keep wasteing away, you've taught me not to cry,
can't get you out of my head, can't push you aside,
and it's killing me on the inside,
my nightmares have become reality,
and you're like a stain that IΒ Β can't wash away.
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Comments: 14

lepsyman [2004-08-25 18:51:41 +0000 UTC]

does anyone even consider writing any other kind of poetry?

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daveyrocsmysocs In reply to lepsyman [2004-08-26 01:14:33 +0000 UTC]

you don't get, so i don't want your critisism.

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medusa11 [2004-08-13 14:20:24 +0000 UTC]

'I drink your poison each day, you hand me glass after glass' i luv that line in particular. another great poem

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daveyrocsmysocs In reply to medusa11 [2004-08-13 14:31:25 +0000 UTC]

thank you so much..i love writing poetry..some how it sets me free..

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medusa11 In reply to daveyrocsmysocs [2004-08-13 14:57:41 +0000 UTC]

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cheesy [2004-08-13 14:15:39 +0000 UTC]

Missy, you write well and the emotion comes shining through.

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daveyrocsmysocs In reply to cheesy [2004-08-13 14:31:58 +0000 UTC]

thak you so much

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Disillusioned-One [2004-08-13 02:03:15 +0000 UTC]

i like it. wonderful words here.

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daveyrocsmysocs In reply to Disillusioned-One [2004-08-13 13:45:06 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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Disillusioned-One In reply to daveyrocsmysocs [2004-08-14 02:27:03 +0000 UTC]

welcome

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MyDyingRose [2004-08-13 00:58:19 +0000 UTC]

i can understand this one

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daveyrocsmysocs In reply to MyDyingRose [2004-08-13 13:45:40 +0000 UTC]

*nod* sadly i can too..

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subliminal-torture [2004-08-12 21:24:51 +0000 UTC]

this is great...i love it. beautiful words, you can really feel the emotion. i dont know what else to say escept that im ing it cos i loves it.

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daveyrocsmysocs In reply to subliminal-torture [2004-08-12 21:28:50 +0000 UTC]

thanks luv.. i'm glad you like it..

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