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slowly the clouds gathered,as i walked through fields of thorns,
barefoot, my blood shed,
the storm roared, as i walked deeper into the darkness,
traveled through the tunnels of nightmares child,
stumbling past trees of death,
following the demon that didn't want to drown,
creeping along the narrow banks of my suicide,
stopped to take a drink, saw my reflection,
my distorted figure staring back at me,
listening to the demons cackle in my face,
one whispered, you look so lost,
and i turned back to the stream of my blood,
i had finally felt alone,
knew what it felt like to be fallen,
it made me realize, i've been wandering all my life,
through fields of thorns, past trees of death, always following the demons that didn't want to drown, i know what called my suicide, i know now, and i still feel so desperately abandoned,
caged is my wonderland
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Comments: 15
DemonicAngelSuicide [2004-07-07 20:38:43 +0000 UTC]
"caged is my wonderland" <--- great line
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XRayeX [2004-07-04 20:26:17 +0000 UTC]
its a beautiful piece of writing, and the avatar is magic.. i love the fact that it changes but just a little
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Lain-Iwakuraa [2004-06-01 18:59:49 +0000 UTC]
nice dark poem, i can really picture the images in my head. nice work
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daveyrocsmysocs In reply to Lain-Iwakuraa [2004-06-01 19:03:02 +0000 UTC]
again, thank you so much...that's how i like to write poems..
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Disillusioned-One [2004-05-29 01:03:44 +0000 UTC]
that is so awesome... really... i love it.
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MidnightChyld [2004-05-28 18:18:22 +0000 UTC]
NIce poem Creepy
And nice little icon! I wish I could make flashy icons, yet I am unskilled
I love how the rose changes color
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daveyrocsmysocs In reply to MidnightChyld [2004-05-28 18:20:42 +0000 UTC]
o thank you...all the pictures...well most of them have a poem w/them so if you are wondering where all my poems are, the pics are just previews...yea made that one day when i was bored..
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MidnightChyld In reply to daveyrocsmysocs [2004-05-28 18:22:14 +0000 UTC]
OH ok, I dont have any poetry on this site..... I am on allpoetry.com / anyway nice write
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daveyrocsmysocs In reply to MidnightChyld [2004-05-28 18:23:11 +0000 UTC]
o ok, thank you...i'll check it out
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