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Published: 2004-04-13 01:26:27 +0000 UTC; Views: 108; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 16
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stroll through the kitchenopen the door feel the breeze freeze my flesh
walk upon the snow barefoot as my cuts stain the virgin ice and my pale skin burns
fog fills the air as i fall to the blanket of slowly melting winter bliss
tears fall
crimson is my blood
my pink lips slowly kiss my wrists as they go numb
my nightgown drapes over my legs tickling me as it blows in the wind
bruised are my veins
i let my arms rest as the knife drops to the ground as iΒ Β watch the puddle of red fill in all around me
closed my watery eyes
and waited for the sun to shine
waited for the rainbow
took a look at my mutilated body as i curled
sat in silence until my heart gave in
gone at last are the days in the shadows
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Comments: 21
daveyrocsmysocs In reply to JayPea [2004-05-28 21:42:54 +0000 UTC]
thank you..the poem or the preview, cuz often people think that the preview image is better than the poem, sadly...
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JayPea In reply to daveyrocsmysocs [2004-05-28 21:43:57 +0000 UTC]
well, I like the prewiev but i was talkin bout the poem :/ not to offend ur prewiev of course, which is fuckin awsome ^_^
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daveyrocsmysocs In reply to JayPea [2004-05-28 21:48:24 +0000 UTC]
thank you, i'm not ofended i'm glad that you were talkin about the poem yay..thank you..
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Vimpressofdoom [2004-05-20 19:12:23 +0000 UTC]
OMG! This is my fave poem by you so far, its so very very...uh, good (sorry I've got a bad vocabulary today )
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daveyrocsmysocs In reply to Vimpressofdoom [2004-05-22 19:04:48 +0000 UTC]
lol it k i'm so glad you like it ...and i hope this doesn't sound conceted but i think this is my best poem too...thank you for the comment
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Disillusioned-One [2004-04-13 01:31:30 +0000 UTC]
oh wow. it reminds me of the demon character that lives in my head. i really like the description in this one.
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daveyrocsmysocs In reply to Disillusioned-One [2004-04-13 01:57:51 +0000 UTC]
o..well..i'll take that as a compliment...thank you...
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Disillusioned-One In reply to daveyrocsmysocs [2004-04-13 02:01:14 +0000 UTC]
it is. i love the little demon guy that lives in my head... yup.
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daveyrocsmysocs In reply to Disillusioned-One [2004-04-13 21:44:56 +0000 UTC]
hehe...little demon guy....i have and alter ego..his name is Ian...yea that had absolutely nothing to do with anything but yea...
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Disillusioned-One In reply to daveyrocsmysocs [2004-04-14 04:33:12 +0000 UTC]
i have about seven alter egos. theres a vampire (male) who fell in love with a 16 year old boy, said 16 year old who is tormented and abused, the suicidal demon, the grim reaper, and some others...
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daveyrocsmysocs In reply to InvisibleTearsFall00 [2004-04-13 01:58:20 +0000 UTC]
why spankyou....lol
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daveyrocsmysocs In reply to SuperHyde [2004-04-13 01:58:59 +0000 UTC]
thank you ....wooo...that means 3 people like it..yay
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SuperHyde In reply to daveyrocsmysocs [2004-04-13 02:14:08 +0000 UTC]
lol, you remind me of alan!
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daveyrocsmysocs In reply to SuperHyde [2004-04-13 21:43:32 +0000 UTC]
alan?....who is this alan that you speak of...?
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SuperHyde In reply to daveyrocsmysocs [2004-04-13 21:57:43 +0000 UTC]
a guy who goes to my school.
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