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Published: 2004-07-17 01:30:27 +0000 UTC; Views: 65; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 8
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Description the words society stuffs in our mouths,
we feed off their every thought,
as if our lives depended on their lies,
brainwashed,
we follow,
without questions, without consideration,
the weak string paths behind the rabbits of our time,
so lost,
they lead us into darkness,
on strings so thin we lay our lives,
we put our trust in sugarcoated tar,
we learn from our mistakes, but it's too late as we breathe in blood soaked words of betrayal,
and choke on the ferment promises mislaid
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Comments: 17

tourniquetshadow [2004-07-17 20:56:22 +0000 UTC]

How true is this?

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daveyrocsmysocs In reply to tourniquetshadow [2004-07-17 23:16:33 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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muddytool [2004-07-17 19:43:32 +0000 UTC]

*tears* I like this.

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daveyrocsmysocs In reply to muddytool [2004-07-17 23:15:57 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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muddytool In reply to daveyrocsmysocs [2004-07-18 21:50:19 +0000 UTC]

your very welcome!

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subliminal-torture [2004-07-17 12:19:21 +0000 UTC]

i like it! very insightful...

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daveyrocsmysocs In reply to subliminal-torture [2004-07-17 19:01:54 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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subliminal-torture In reply to daveyrocsmysocs [2004-07-18 13:41:13 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome!

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medusa11 [2004-07-17 09:13:06 +0000 UTC]

another poem i agree with

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daveyrocsmysocs In reply to medusa11 [2004-07-17 19:00:45 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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Disillusioned-One [2004-07-17 03:48:37 +0000 UTC]

very very nicely done, and really real. i know everything you're saying is true.

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daveyrocsmysocs In reply to Disillusioned-One [2004-07-17 18:58:38 +0000 UTC]

thank you so much

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Disillusioned-One In reply to daveyrocsmysocs [2004-07-17 22:32:27 +0000 UTC]

welcome so much

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MyDyingRose [2004-07-17 01:49:26 +0000 UTC]

hmm, makes me think of what the Bush administration is doing to America: "They lead us into darkness, on strings so thin we lay our lives."

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daveyrocsmysocs In reply to MyDyingRose [2004-07-17 02:09:30 +0000 UTC]

exactly...there are a lot of things i hate about this world..if you didn't already notice lol...

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LossOfReality [2004-07-17 01:35:00 +0000 UTC]

Nicely done!

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daveyrocsmysocs In reply to LossOfReality [2004-07-17 01:46:21 +0000 UTC]

thank you so much

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