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Published: 2005-01-17 01:20:58 +0000 UTC; Views: 97; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 5
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i feel your clumsy pulse,beating over and over against my unwanted tears,
holding my heart in your hands,
you make me promise i will always love you,
holding all your dreams and fears in my heart,
i make you promise you will never hurt me,
i feel your warm blood dripping over my wrists,
bleeding all over my pretty little face,
you rip out my bruised veins,
and i spit all over your pure little soul,
this rhapsody is larger than the hate i feel for you,
and there's still a hole in your head,
now staring down at your pretty little dead face,
i hope this expresses how much i love you,
i really felt that i didn't have the strength,
you really feel you've won now,
love isn't like anything especially a hole in the head,
love isn't like anything especially hatred,
sleep well, i hope you rest in peace,
i hope you never catch another second of sleep,
as i lay in this grave, i hope you rot in hell,
as i lay down to sleep i kiss you're picture goodnight, with dry eyes,
as i haunt your sleepless nights, i watch you drown.
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Comments: 15
SelfMutilator [2005-02-18 02:23:40 +0000 UTC]
I didnt really understand that. But what I got from it was beautiful! Wonderful Job.
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daveyrocsmysocs In reply to SelfMutilator [2005-02-18 02:34:57 +0000 UTC]
o, thank you...i'll explain, i think a lot of people interpreted it wrong, it is like a syllique between two people..they take turns saying what they've always wanted too to each other. so like every other line is the first persons thoughts..they're just sort of entwined.
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SelfMutilator In reply to daveyrocsmysocs [2005-02-18 02:44:36 +0000 UTC]
oh.. well it was awesome
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dollsfall [2005-01-19 02:02:17 +0000 UTC]
That is so beautiful. Startling at first, because "love" in the title usually means flowers and candy... so yeah omg it's so gorgeous!
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daveyrocsmysocs In reply to dollsfall [2005-01-19 15:10:21 +0000 UTC]
thank you so much. i'm glad you liked it.
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MyDyingRose [2005-01-18 23:58:37 +0000 UTC]
See, it started all nice, and them WHAMMY! blood covered wrists, heads with holes in em...
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daveyrocsmysocs In reply to MyDyingRose [2005-01-19 15:09:43 +0000 UTC]
lmao ...so what's the verdict?
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MyDyingRose In reply to daveyrocsmysocs [2005-01-20 23:29:03 +0000 UTC]
the verdict: metaphoric gore=good
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medusa11 [2005-01-17 17:59:28 +0000 UTC]
wow, there's some really nicel ines in there, like the 1 about love being liek a hole in the head and the bruised veins.
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daveyrocsmysocs In reply to medusa11 [2005-01-17 19:44:54 +0000 UTC]
thank you..i'm glad you liked it.
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bulimic-rainbows [2005-01-17 01:22:55 +0000 UTC]
Reminds me of The Used...
"Love isn't like anything, especially a fucking knife."
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daveyrocsmysocs In reply to bulimic-rainbows [2005-01-17 01:23:35 +0000 UTC]
lol..well, it made you think..that's a good thing.
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